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judar

Dec. 8, 2024

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商城

今天我和家人一起去了商城。我买了零食,妹妹买了一件毛衣。我喜欢商城,因为哪里有很多事情可做,比如剧院,餐馆和拱廊。我觉得我妹妹买了太多衣服,但她说那是她的钱。下次我逛商城,我要买做饭用的刀。


Today I went to the mall with my family. I bought snacks and my sister bought a sweater. I like the mall because there is so much to do there, like theatres, restaurants and arcades. I think my sister bought too many clothes but she said it was her money. Next time I go to the mall, I will buy a knife for cooking.

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商城

今天我和家人一起去了商城。

我买了零食,妹妹买了一件毛衣。

我喜欢商城,因为里有很多事情可做有趣的地方,比如剧院餐馆和拱廊。

1、我小时候分辨“哪”和“那”的方法:“哪”有口字旁,所以用在提问的句子里。
2、“很多事情可做”的话,“比如”后边应该跟可做的事嘛。

我觉得我妹妹买了太多衣服,但她说那是她的钱。

下次逛商城,我要买做饭用的刀。

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不错哦,加油!

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judar

Dec. 9, 2024

52

谢谢!

商城

今天我和家人一起去了商城。

我买了零食,妹妹买了一件毛衣。

我喜欢商城,因为里有很多事情可做,比如剧院,餐馆和拱廊。

我觉得我妹妹买了太多衣服,但她说那是她的钱。

下次我逛商城,我要买做饭用的刀。

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judar

Dec. 9, 2024

52

谢谢啊!

商城


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今天我和家人一起去了商城。


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我买了零食,妹妹买了一件毛衣。


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我喜欢商城,因为哪里有很多事情可做,比如剧院,餐馆和拱廊。


我喜欢商城,因为里有很多事情可做,比如剧院,餐馆和拱廊。

我喜欢商城,因为里有很多事情可做有趣的地方,比如剧院餐馆和拱廊。

1、我小时候分辨“哪”和“那”的方法:“哪”有口字旁,所以用在提问的句子里。 2、“很多事情可做”的话,“比如”后边应该跟可做的事嘛。

我觉得我妹妹买了太多衣服,但她说那是她的钱。


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

下次我逛商城,我要买做饭用的刀。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

下次逛商城,我要买做饭用的刀。

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