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Sept. 22, 2024

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发酵的味道

从小时候,我一向喜欢猕猴桃。果肉的颜色非常鲜艳,味道也很不错。汁水清爽,还略带气泡感,就像汽水一样。以前猕猴桃为我是个奢侈。比起其他水果贵,所以我妈从来都很少买它 。我好久没吃猕猴桃了,但上个星期终于买了两个。我现在已经工作了,可以自己赚钱,所以不介意买这种水果。毕竟我也想多样化我吃的水果种类。

挺傻的是,本来我不知道怎么该削猕猴桃的皮,最后把它切成两半,然后用勺子挖出果肉。果然很好吃。对身体好处也很多,例如可以帮助调节血糖水平并滋养有益的肠道细菌。

我感到很满意,所以几天后又去买了。我第二次买猕猴桃那天已经吃了很多水果。我怕会拉肚子,所以把它放在桌子上,觉得第二天吃最好。第二天早上我醒了就闻到了一股很异常的味道。最合适的描述是好像有东西在发酵,或者仿佛有人在我睡觉的时候做了腌菜。真没想到,我前一天买的猕猴桃腐烂了!没有发霉,也没有长毛只是腐烂了,流出着又臭又粘的汁水。太恶心了!我立即把它拿到外面倒掉了。幸运的是,恶臭没有蔓延到整个房间。

发生了这件事以后,我还没再买猕猴桃,不过光顾了买猕猴桃的那家便利商店。我发现猕猴桃打了很大的折扣,推断他们卖的猕猴桃肯定接近变烂!


The Smell of Fermentation

Since I was a child, I’ve always liked kiwis. The color of the flesh is very vibrant, and the taste is great. The juice is refreshing and has a slight effervescence, almost like soda. Kiwis were a luxury for me back then. They were more expensive than other fruits, so my mom rarely bought them. It had been a long time since I last had kiwis, but last week, I finally bought two kiwis. Now that I’m working and earning my own money, I don’t mind buying such fruits. After all, I wanted to diversify the kinds of fruits I consumed.

It’s a bit silly, but at first I didn’t know how to peel a kiwi. In the end, I decided to cut it in half and scoop out the flesh with a spoon. As expected, it was delicious. Kiwis are also beneficial for health as they can help regulate blood sugar levels and nourish beneficial gut bacteria.

I was so satisfied that a few days later, I bought kiwis again. On the day I bought them the second time, I had already eaten too much fruit. Fearing that I might get diarrhea, I left the kiwis on the table. I thought it would be best to eat them the following day. When I woke up the next morning, I immediately smelled a very unusual odor. The best way to describe it is as if something was fermenting, or as if someone had made pickles while I slept. I was shocked to find that the kiwis I had bought the day before rotted! They hadn’t grown mold or fuzz, but they were decaying, leaking foul-smelling, sticky juice. It was so disgusting! I immediately took them outside and threw them away. Fortunately, the stench didn’t spread throughout the whole room.

Since then, I haven’t bought kiwis again, but I did visit the convenience store where I had bought them. I noticed that the kiwis were heavily discounted, which made me believe that the kiwis they sold were close to going bad!

Corrections

发酵的味道

从小时候,我一向喜欢猕猴桃。

果肉的颜色非常鲜艳,味道也很不错。

汁水清爽,还略带气泡感,就像汽水一样。

以前猕猴桃我是个奢侈

比起其他贵的水果,所以我妈从来都很少买它 。

我好久没吃猕猴桃了,上个星期终于买了两个。

我现在已经工作了,可以自己赚钱,所以不介意买这种水果。

毕竟我也想多样化我吃的水果种类。



挺傻的是,本来我不知道
怎么削猕猴桃的皮,最后把它切成两半,然后用勺子挖出果肉。

哈哈哈,我也喜欢这个吃法。

果然很好吃。

对身体好处也很多,例如可以帮助调节血糖水平并滋养有益的肠道细菌。

我感到很满意,所以几天后又去买了。

我第二次买猕猴桃那天已经吃了很多水果。

我怕会拉肚子,所以把它放在桌子上,觉得第二天吃最好。

第二天早上我醒了就闻到了一股很异常的味道。

最合适的描述是好像有东西在发酵,或者仿佛有人在我睡觉的时候做了腌菜。

真没想到,我前一天买的猕猴桃腐烂了!

没有发霉,也没有长毛只是腐烂了,流出又臭又粘的汁水。

太恶心了!

我立即把它拿到外面倒掉了。

幸运的是,恶臭没有蔓延到整个房间。

发生了这件事以后,我还没再买猕猴桃,不过光顾了买猕猴桃的那家便利商店。

我发现猕猴桃打了很大的折扣,推断他们卖的猕猴桃肯定接近变烂腐烂了

Feedback

猕猴桃在常温下会继续成熟,以至于发酵腐烂。所以在中国国内网上买的猕猴桃,都是六七分熟的。收到的时候硬邦邦的,常温放个两三天就会变软变熟啦。

下次你买到已经熟透的,最好放冰箱冷藏,并尽快吃掉它。

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atomcdismantling

Sept. 23, 2024

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谢谢你的修改和建议!

我只有一个问题:
比起其他贵的水果 -> 你可以详细解释一下这个修改吗?我想说的是,"Compared to other fruits, they (kiwis) are more expensive"。

顺便说一下,我在写这篇文章时才发现猕猴桃是来自中国的。我一直以为它是新西兰的。中国真的很棒啊,有很多好吃的水果!

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Tammy

Sept. 23, 2024

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哎呀,那是我误会了,不好意思。那应该是“比其他的水果贵,......”

对的,猕猴桃原产在中国的华中地区。而且中国现在还保有很多不同品种的猕猴桃,所以它在中国不算贵的水果。欢迎有机会的时候来品尝呀。

发酵的味道


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从小时候,我一向喜欢猕猴桃。


从小时候,我一向喜欢猕猴桃。

果肉的颜色非常鲜艳,味道也很不错。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

汁水清爽,还略带气泡感,就像汽水一样。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

以前猕猴桃为我是个奢侈。


以前猕猴桃我是个奢侈

比起其他水果贵,所以我妈从来都很少买它 。


比起其他贵的水果,所以我妈从来都很少买它 。

我好久没吃猕猴桃了,但上个星期终于买了两个。


我好久没吃猕猴桃了,上个星期终于买了两个。

我现在已经工作了,可以自己赚钱,所以不介意买这种水果。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

毕竟我也想多样化我吃的水果种类。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

挺傻的是,本来我不知道怎么该削猕猴桃的皮,最后把它切成两半,然后用勺子挖出果肉。




挺傻的是,本来我不知道
怎么削猕猴桃的皮,最后把它切成两半,然后用勺子挖出果肉。

哈哈哈,我也喜欢这个吃法。

果然很好吃。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

对身体好处也很多,例如可以帮助调节血糖水平并滋养有益的肠道细菌。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我感到很满意,所以几天后又去买了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我第二次买猕猴桃那天已经吃了很多水果。


我第二次买猕猴桃那天已经吃了很多水果。

我怕会拉肚子,所以把它放在桌子上,觉得第二天吃最好。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

第二天早上我醒了就闻到了一股很异常的味道。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

最合适的描述是好像有东西在发酵,或者仿佛有人在我睡觉的时候做了腌菜。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

真没想到,我前一天买的猕猴桃腐烂了!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

没有发霉,也没有长毛只是腐烂了,流出着又臭又粘的汁水。


没有发霉,也没有长毛只是腐烂了,流出又臭又粘的汁水。

太恶心了!


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我立即把它拿到外面倒掉了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

幸运的是,恶臭没有蔓延到整个房间。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

发生了这件事以后,我还没再买猕猴桃,不过光顾了买猕猴桃的那家便利商店。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我发现猕猴桃打了很大的折扣,推断他们卖的猕猴桃肯定接近变烂!


我发现猕猴桃打了很大的折扣,推断他们卖的猕猴桃肯定接近变烂腐烂了

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