Aug. 20, 2023
去加拿大旅遊
我上個星期去了加拿大。我和我姐去了很多地方。有一個地方是多倫多的一座中國城。我們也去了很多博物館。有些地方，我姐用她水彩畫下來。我買了一個浣熊琺瑯胸針。
I went to Canada last week. My sister and I went to a lot of places. One place was one of Toronto's Chinatowns. We also went to a lot of museums. In some places, my sister would paint the scene in watercolor. I also bought a raccoon enamel pin.
去加拿大旅遊
我上個星期去了加拿大。
我和我姐去了很多地方。
有其中一個地方是多倫多裏面的一座中國城。
"有一個地方" feels like unrelated to the "很多地方" that me and my sis went to
我們也去了很多博物館。
有在某些地方，我姐用她的水彩把風景畫下來。
or 我姐用她的水彩把某些地方的(風景/景色)畫下來。
我買了一個浣熊形狀的琺瑯胸針。
Feels more natural this way in daily use/speaking
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我上個星期去了加拿大。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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我和我姐去了很多地方。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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有一個地方是多倫多的一座中國城。
"有一個地方" feels like unrelated to the "很多地方" that me and my sis went to
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我們也去了很多博物館。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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有些地方，我姐用她水彩畫下來。
or 我姐用她的水彩把某些地方的(風景/景色)畫下來。 有些地方，我姐會用 |
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我買了一個浣熊琺瑯胸針。 我買了一個浣熊形狀的琺瑯胸針。 Feels more natural this way in daily use/speaking |
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