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Jan. 1, 2026

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厨房里的小灾难

今天我想做炸鸡,但一切都没有按计划进行。刚开始,我把鸡肉腌好了,可是不小心撒太多盐了,尝了一口简直咸到受不了。然后我准备裹面粉,结果面粉撒得到处都是,厨房像下雪了一样。
开始炸的时候,我又被油溅了一手,差点把袖子弄脏。鸡炸得有点焦,闻起来虽然香,但是看起来像黑炭。我想挽救一下,加点酱汁,但酱汁没调好,又太甜了。
虽然今天做的鸡看起来有点糟糕,但是家里的人还是笑着吃了几块。做饭真是既累又好玩的事情,每次都会有意想不到的小麻烦。
明天我打算再试一次,这次一定要控制好盐和油温,希望能炸出真正好吃的鸡。

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厨房里的小灾难

今天我想做炸鸡,但一切都没有按计划进行。

刚开始,我鸡肉腌好了,可是不小心撒太多盐了,尝了一口简直咸到受不了。

我把鸡肉腌好了——这句话可以有两层意思:1)I have finished marinating the chicken. 2)The chicken I marinated is very good!

然后我准备裹面粉,结果面粉撒得到处都是,厨房像下雪了一样。

开始炸的时候,我又被油溅了一手,差点把袖子弄脏。

鸡炸得有点焦,闻起来虽然香,但是看起来像黑炭。

我想挽救一下,加点酱汁,但酱汁没调好,又太甜了。

虽然今天做的鸡看起来有点糟糕,但是家里的人还是笑着吃了几块。

做饭真是既累又好玩的事情,每次都会有意想不到的小麻烦。

明天我打算再试一次,这次一定要控制好盐和油温,希望能炸出真正好吃的鸡。

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写得很不错哦!用词相当细腻精准了。

厨房里的小灾难

今天我想做炸鸡,但一切都没有按计划进行。

刚开始,我把鸡肉腌好了,可是不小心撒太多盐了,尝了一口简直咸到受不了。

然后我准备裹面粉,结果面粉撒得到处都是,厨房像下雪了一样。

开始炸的时候,我又被油溅了一手,差点把袖子弄脏。

鸡炸得有点焦,闻起来虽然香,但是看起来像黑炭。

我想挽救一下,加点酱汁,但酱汁没调好,又太甜了。

虽然今天做的鸡看起来有点糟糕,但是家里的人还是笑着吃了几块。

做饭真是既累又好玩的事情,每次都会有意想不到的小麻烦。

明天我打算再试一次,这次一定要控制好盐和油温,希望能炸出真正好吃的鸡。

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我吃炸鸡一般是饿一餐去吃炸鸡自助,吃个爽

厨房里的小灾难


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今天我想做炸鸡,但一切都没有按计划进行。


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刚开始,我把鸡肉腌好了,可是不小心撒太多盐了,尝了一口简直咸到受不了。


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刚开始,我鸡肉腌好了,可是不小心撒太多盐了,尝了一口简直咸到受不了。

我把鸡肉腌好了——这句话可以有两层意思:1)I have finished marinating the chicken. 2)The chicken I marinated is very good!

然后我准备裹面粉,结果面粉撒得到处都是,厨房像下雪了一样。


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开始炸的时候,我又被油溅了一手,差点把袖子弄脏。


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鸡炸得有点焦,闻起来虽然香,但是看起来像黑炭。


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我想挽救一下,加点酱汁,但酱汁没调好,又太甜了。


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虽然今天做的鸡看起来有点糟糕,但是家里的人还是笑着吃了几块。


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做饭真是既累又好玩的事情,每次都会有意想不到的小麻烦。


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明天我打算再试一次,这次一定要控制好盐和油温,希望能炸出真正好吃的鸡。


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