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atomcdismantling

Dec. 5, 2022

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印尼的岛屿

五个最大的岛屿在印尼是爪哇岛、加里曼丹岛、蘇門答臘岛、苏拉威西岛和新幾內亞岛。它们是印尼的最主要的岛屿。印尼当然也有其他重要的岛屿,比如有名的巴厘岛。在中国,知道巴厘岛的人多不多?
我的家乡是萬隆,在爪哇岛的西。但现在我是住在其他城市。
哦,对了,我觉得蘇門答臘很难写! 如果没有键盘,我就不会写!


The five largest islands in Indonesia are Java, Kalimantan, Sumatra, Sulawesi and New Guinea. They are the main islands of Indonesia. Of course, Indonesia also has other important islands, such as the famous Bali. In China, do many people know about Bali?
My hometown is Bandung, in the west of Java Island. But now I am living in South Tangerang.
Oh yes, I find Sumatra difficult to write! I can't write without a keyboard!

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印尼的岛屿

印尼五个最大的岛屿在印尼是爪哇岛、加里曼丹岛、蘇門答臘岛、苏拉威西岛和新幾內亞岛。

它们是印尼最主要的岛屿。

印尼当然也有其他重要的岛屿,比如有名的巴厘岛。

可以说:著名的。

在中国,知道巴厘岛的人多不多?

我的家乡是萬隆,在爪哇岛的西

但现在我是住在其他城市。

哦,对了,我觉得蘇門答臘很难写!

如果没有键盘,我就不会写!

印尼的岛屿

五个最大的岛屿在印尼在印尼,较大的五个岛屿是爪哇岛、加里曼丹岛、蘇門答臘岛、苏拉威西岛和新幾內亞岛。

最大的只能有一个。

它们是印尼的最主要的岛屿。

它们是印尼的主要岛屿也行。“的”不要太多。

印尼这儿当然也有其他重要的岛屿,比如有名的巴厘岛。

印尼可以不用一直重复。

在中国,知道巴厘岛的人多不多?

我知道,感觉挺出名的。想去旅游!

我的家乡是萬隆,位于爪哇岛西

是在爪哇岛上吗?

现在我是住在其他城市。

哦,对了,我觉得蘇門答臘很难写!

哈哈哈,因为你用的是繁体字!苏门答腊岛,简体好写很多。

如果没有键盘,我就不会写不是用键盘打字,而是写在纸上的话,我根本写不出来!

能理解,但是不搭配。

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印尼现在天气如何?我在的城市已经下雪了,非常冷!

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atomcdismantling

Dec. 10, 2022

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非常感谢! How do you say 'thanks for correcting me' in Mandarin? I want to use it for next time!
在我住的城市,最近经常下雨了!
对, 萬隆是在爪哇岛上。

印尼五个最大的岛屿在印尼是爪哇岛、加里曼丹岛、蘇門答臘岛、苏拉威西岛和新幾內亞岛。

它们是印尼最主要的岛屿。

印尼当然也有其他重要的岛屿,比如有名的巴厘岛。

在中国,知道听过巴厘岛/认识巴厘岛的人多不多?

Has heard of the name
Vs Know the place
You choose what u want :)

我的家乡是萬隆,位于爪哇岛的西

但现在我是住在其他城市。

哦,对了,我觉得蘇門答臘很难写!

如果没有键盘,我就不会写!

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原来印尼是有五个岛屿组成的,我现在才知道,涨知识了!

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atomcdismantling

Dec. 5, 2022

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Thank you for the correction!
In fact, Indonesia has over 17000 islands, but those five are the most prominent ones. There are perhaps thousands of unnamed or uninhabited islands!
I have two questions, if you don't mind.
1. From what I understand, 岛 is a suffix, and 岛屿 is the noun. I can't, for example, say 这个国家有很多岛。Is my understanding correct?
2. Besides paraphrasing, what do Chinese people do when they don't know/forget how to write a character?

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leeekayi

Dec. 6, 2022

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Thank you for the correction! In fact, Indonesia has over 17000 islands, but those five are the most prominent ones. There are perhaps thousands of unnamed or uninhabited islands! I have two questions, if you don't mind. 1. From what I understand, 岛 is a suffix, and 岛屿 is the noun. I can't, for example, say 这个国家有很多岛。Is my understanding correct? 2. Besides paraphrasing, what do Chinese people do when they don't know/forget how to write a character?

I can’t say it is totally wrong, but orally we do say 这个地方由多个岛组成, well to be honest, I use 岛 more often than 岛屿 because I usually just say xx岛 (xx - name of the island) and personally, I think there’s much difference.
Haha for your second question, actually I will forget some characters as well, especially when we write it less often now, because we have computer. But i figured out that for those periods that I read Chinese book (as leisure reading), my Chinese becomes better but for those moments that I am writing english or other languages for most of the time, some Chinese characters just escape from my mind.

印尼的岛屿


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五个最大的岛屿在印尼是爪哇岛、加里曼丹岛、蘇門答臘岛、苏拉威西岛和新幾內亞岛。


印尼五个最大的岛屿在印尼是爪哇岛、加里曼丹岛、蘇門答臘岛、苏拉威西岛和新幾內亞岛。

五个最大的岛屿在印尼在印尼,较大的五个岛屿是爪哇岛、加里曼丹岛、蘇門答臘岛、苏拉威西岛和新幾內亞岛。

最大的只能有一个。

印尼五个最大的岛屿在印尼是爪哇岛、加里曼丹岛、蘇門答臘岛、苏拉威西岛和新幾內亞岛。

它们是印尼的最主要的岛屿。


它们是印尼最主要的岛屿。

它们是印尼的最主要的岛屿。

它们是印尼的主要岛屿也行。“的”不要太多。

它们是印尼最主要的岛屿。

印尼当然也有其他重要的岛屿,比如有名的巴厘岛。


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印尼这儿当然也有其他重要的岛屿,比如有名的巴厘岛。

印尼可以不用一直重复。

印尼当然也有其他重要的岛屿,比如有名的巴厘岛。

可以说:著名的。

在中国,知道巴厘岛的人多不多?


在中国,知道听过巴厘岛/认识巴厘岛的人多不多?

Has heard of the name Vs Know the place You choose what u want :)

在中国,知道巴厘岛的人多不多?

我知道,感觉挺出名的。想去旅游!

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我的家乡是萬隆,在爪哇岛的西。


我的家乡是萬隆,位于爪哇岛的西

我的家乡是萬隆,位于爪哇岛西

是在爪哇岛上吗?

我的家乡是萬隆,在爪哇岛的西

但现在我是住在其他城市。


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现在我是住在其他城市。

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哦,对了,我觉得蘇門答臘很难写!


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哦,对了,我觉得蘇門答臘很难写!

哈哈哈,因为你用的是繁体字!苏门答腊岛,简体好写很多。

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如果没有键盘,我就不会写!


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如果没有键盘,我就不会写不是用键盘打字,而是写在纸上的话,我根本写不出来!

能理解,但是不搭配。

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