Aug. 20, 2025
减肥 （2）
七月体检发现脂肪肝，医生建议减重7%。我每天早上坚持快走，控制饮食，一餐尽量不超过400大卡。米饭、面包、拉面等都不能吃。饿的时候吃点鸡蛋和坚果充饥。减肥真辛苦啊！
7月の検診で脂肪肝が見つかり、医師から7%の減量を勧められました。毎朝早歩きをして、1食400カロリーを超えないように食事制限をしています。ご飯、パン、ラーメンは避けています。お腹が空いたら、卵とナッツを食べます。減量は本当に大変です！
减肥 （2）
七月体检发现有脂肪肝，医生建议减重7%。
我每天早上坚持快走，控制饮食，一餐尽量不超过400大卡。
米饭、面包、拉面等都不能吃。
饿的时候吃点鸡蛋和坚果充饥。
减肥真辛苦啊！
减肥 （2）
七月体检发现脂肪肝，医生建议减重7%。
我坚持每天早上坚持快走，控制饮食，一餐尽量不超过400大卡。
米饭、面包、拉面等都不能吃。
饿的时候只能吃点鸡蛋和坚果充饥。
减肥真辛苦啊！
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好有毅力喔！^^b
祝你減肥成功！
Aug. 20, 2025
添削ありがとうございます。健康のためなら、頑張るっきゃないですね。笑
减肥 （2）
七月体检发现脂肪肝，医生建议减重7%。
我每天早上坚持快走，控制饮食，一餐尽量不超过400大卡。
米饭、面包、拉面等都不能吃。
饿的时候吃点鸡蛋和坚果充饥。
减肥真辛苦啊！
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文字极其精炼，很好。
Aug. 20, 2025
好久不见了！ 谢谢您！
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