Nov. 24, 2024
你真的需要闹钟吗？
据医学研究，闹钟对身体和心理健康有不好的影响。与其用闹钟，不如用光线醒过来。这种方式更自然，你慢慢地醒过来。另一方面，闹钟突然醒过来，因此提高心跳和压力激素。
这个劝告有道理，可是我个人觉得闹钟是一个现代必不可少的东西。我没办法自然醒过来，而且我冒上班迟到.
According to medical research, alarm clocks have a negative impact on physical and mental health. Instead of using an alarm clock, it would be better to wake up with light. This way is more natural and you wake up slowly. On the other hand, an alarm clock wakes you up suddenly and therefore increases your heartbeat and stress hormones.
This advice makes sense, but I personally think the alarm clock is an essential thing in modern times. I cannot wake up naturally, and I risk being late for work.
你真的需要闹钟吗？
据医学研究，闹钟对身体和心理健康有不好的影响。
与其用闹钟，不如用光线醒过来。
这种方式更自然，你是慢慢地醒过来的。
According to medical research, alarm clocks have a negative impact on physical and mental health. Instead of using an alarm clock, it would be better to wake up with light. This way is more natural and you wake up slowly. On the other hand, an alarm clock wakes you up suddenly and therefore increases your heartbeat and stress hormones.
This advice makes sense, but I personally think the alarm clock is an essential thing in modern times. I cannot wake up naturally, and I risk being late for work.
另一方面，闹钟突然醒过来，因此提高突然被闹钟惊醒过来，会导致你的心跳和压力激素激增。
这个劝告有道理，可是我个人觉得闹钟是一个现代必不可少的东西。
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我没办法自然醒过来，而且我得冒上班迟到的风险。——这句没出现在修改的句子里。
Dec. 10, 2024
非常感谢您的指正！:)
另一方面，闹钟突然醒过来，因此想响起来，会提高心跳和压力激素。
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这个建议是有道理的，可是我个人觉得闹钟是一个现代必不可少的东西。
Dec. 10, 2024
非常感谢您的指正！:)
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这种方式更自然，你慢慢地醒过来。 这种方式更自然，你是慢慢地醒过来的。 According to medical research, alarm clocks have a negative impact on physical and mental health. Instead of using an alarm clock, it would be better to wake up with light. This way is more natural and you wake up slowly. On the other hand, an alarm clock wakes you up suddenly and therefore increases your heartbeat and stress hormones. This advice makes sense, but I personally think the alarm clock is an essential thing in modern times. I cannot wake up naturally, and I risk being late for work. |
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另一方面，闹钟突然醒过来，因此提高心跳和压力激素。 另一方面，闹钟突然 另一方面， |
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这个劝告有道理，可是我个人觉得闹钟是一个现代必不可少的东西。
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