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Jan. 15, 2021

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你好!我的第一次写日记

你好,我的名字是玫瑰。
我学习了中文一段时间。我的中文不好。
我知道很多话,可是斗争写句子。
我说的有道理吗?可能没有哈哈哈哈。
总之,唯有不断努力,才能提高。
暂时再见。


Hi! This is my first journal entry.
I've been studying Chinese for a while. My Chinese isn't good.
I know a lot of words but I struggle writing sentences.
Do I make sense? Probably not haha
Anyway, the only way to improve is to keep trying.
Bye for now.

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你好!我第一次写日记

知道很多话,可是斗争认识很多句子,但我仍在苦练写句子。

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说的有道理吗?的话or句子通顺吗

I guess you want to express " Do I make myself understood?" So you need to say 我的话or句子 通顺吗,有理解到吗。 “我说的有道理吗” sounds you are expressing " am I right or reasonable?"

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哈哈哈哈,你真可爱!😄

你好!我的第一次写日记

你好,我的名字是玫瑰。

我学习了中文一段时间。

我的中文不好。

知道会说很多话,可是斗争不会写句子。

我说的有道理吗?

可能没有哈哈哈哈。

总之,唯有不断努力,才能提高。

暂时再见。

你好!我的第一次写日记


你好!我的第一次写日记

你好!我第一次写日记

你好,我的名字是玫瑰。


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我学习了中文一段时间。


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我的中文不好。


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我知道很多话,可是斗争写句子。


知道会说很多话,可是斗争不会写句子。

知道很多话,可是斗争认识很多句子,但我仍在苦练写句子。

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我说的有道理吗?


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说的有道理吗?的话or句子通顺吗

I guess you want to express " Do I make myself understood?" So you need to say 我的话or句子 通顺吗,有理解到吗。 “我说的有道理吗” sounds you are expressing " am I right or reasonable?"

可能没有哈哈哈哈。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

总之,唯有不断努力,才能提高。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

暂时再见。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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