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judar

Dec. 12, 2024

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我今天开了个会。我很恼火,因为会议很短,但我的旅程很长。 回来的路上,公园里弥漫着大麻的味道。这是我讨厌伦敦的一点。


I had a meeting today. I was annoyed because the meeting was short but my journey was long. On the way back, the park smelled of marijuana. This is one thing I hate about London.

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因为“会”在中文有两个意思can和meeting,标题可以说“一个会议”或“开会”。

我很恼火,因为会议很短,但我的程很

路程只和远、近搭配。

我今天开了个会。

我很恼火,因为会议很短,但我的程很长。

I had a meeting today. I was annoyed because the meeting was short but my journey was long. On the way back, the park smelled of marijuana. This is one thing I hate about London.

回来的路上,公园里弥漫着大麻的味道。

这是我讨厌伦敦的一点。

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不错哦,加油!

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judar

Dec. 13, 2024

52

谢谢!

我很恼火,因为会议很短,但我的旅程很长内容很多

我这样理解的,不知正确否?

这是我讨厌伦敦的一点。

也可以“这是我讨厌伦敦的一个方面。”


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

因为“会”在中文有两个意思can和meeting,标题可以说“一个会议”或“开会”。

我今天开了个会。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我很恼火,因为会议很短,但我的旅程很长。


我很恼火,因为会议很短,但我的旅程很长内容很多

我这样理解的,不知正确否?

我很恼火,因为会议很短,但我的程很长。

I had a meeting today. I was annoyed because the meeting was short but my journey was long. On the way back, the park smelled of marijuana. This is one thing I hate about London.

我很恼火,因为会议很短,但我的程很

路程只和远、近搭配。

回来的路上,公园里弥漫着大麻的味道。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

这是我讨厌伦敦的一点。


这是我讨厌伦敦的一点。

也可以“这是我讨厌伦敦的一个方面。”

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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