May 29, 2025
从赵括之死想到的
赵括从小读了很多兵书。他不仅对兵法理论很熟悉，而且说的很好。在军事讨论中，没有人说得过他。尽管赵奢为儿子感到骄傲，他也知道赵括缺乏实际经验。假如赵括带兵迟早就出问题。公元前260年，赵奢怕的事情成真了。尽管很多人再三告诫赵括不要轻敌秦军，但他还是决定进攻更强大的敌军。由于赵括的骄傲，许多士兵因此被杀。从这个故事可以看出，光有理论不够，实践也很重要。
Zhao Kuo had read a lot of military books since he was a child. He was not only familiar with the theory of the art of war, but also spoke very well. In military discussions, no one could beat him. Although Zhao She was proud of his son, he also knew that Zhao Kuo lacked practical experience. If Zhao Kuo ever led the troops, problems would arise sooner or later. In 260 BC, what Zhao She feared came true. Although many people repeatedly warned Zhao Kuo not to underestimate the Qin army, he decided to attack the stronger enemy army. Because of Zhao Kuo's pride, many soldiers were killed. From this story, we can see that theory alone is not enough, and practice is also important.
从赵括之死想到的
赵括从小读了很多兵书。
在军事讨论中，没有人说得过他。
听起来有点不自然，但是我也不知道怎么改
尽管赵奢为儿子感到骄傲，他也知道赵括缺乏实际经验。
假如果赵括带兵迟早就会出问题。
公元前260年，赵奢怕担忧的事情成真了。
尽管很多人再三告诫赵括不要对秦军轻敌秦军，但他还是决定进攻更强大的敌军。
由于赵括的骄傲自负，许多士兵因此被杀。
从这个故事可以看出，光有理论不够，实践也很重要。
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May 30, 2025
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June 2, 2025
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从赵括之死想到的
他不仅对兵法理论很熟悉，而且说的很好。
在军事讨论中，没有人说得过他。
尽管赵奢为儿子感到骄傲，他也知道赵括缺乏实际经验。
假如赵括带兵迟早就会出问题。
公元前260年，赵奢怕的事情成真了。
尽管很多人再三告诫赵括不要轻敌秦军，但他还是决定进攻更强大的敌军。
由于赵括的骄傲，许多士兵因此被杀。
从这个故事可以看出，光有理论不够，实践也很重要。
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赵括从小读了很多兵书，不仅熟悉兵法理论，说起兵法来也头头是道。在军事讨论中，没有人能说得过他。虽然赵奢为儿子感到骄傲，但他也深知赵括缺乏实战经验，若让赵括带兵，早晚会出问题。公元前260年，赵奢担心的事果然发生了。尽管多人反复告诫赵括不可轻视秦军，他还是决定进攻更强大的敌军。由于赵括的轻敌自负，众多士兵战死沙场。从这个故事我们可以看出，仅有理论是不够的，实践同样重要。
May 30, 2025
谢谢！
从赵括之死想到的
赵括从小读了很多兵书。
他不仅对兵法理论很熟悉，而且说的讲得也很好。
在军事讨论中，没有人说得过他。
尽管赵奢为儿子感到骄傲，他也知道赵括缺乏实际经验。
假如赵括带兵迟早就会出问题。
公元前260年，赵奢怕担心的事情成真了。
尽管很多人再三告诫赵括不要轻敌视秦军，但他还是决定进攻更强大的敌军。
由于赵括的骄傲，许多士兵因此被杀。
从这个故事可以看出，光有理论不够，实践也很重要。
May 29, 2025
谢谢！
从由赵括之死想到的引发的感想
赵括从小读了很多兵书。
他不仅对兵法理论很熟悉，而且说的很好。
在军事讨论中，没有人说得过他。
尽管赵奢为儿子感到骄傲，但是他也知道赵括缺乏实际经验。
假如赵括带兵，迟早就会出问题。
公元前260年，赵奢害怕的事情成真了。
尽管很多人再三告诫赵括不要轻敌视秦军，但他还是决定进攻更强大的敌军。
轻视秦军
or
轻敌 （with context, 秦军should be mentioned before）
由于赵括的骄傲，许多士兵因此被杀。
从这个故事可以看出，光有理论不够，实践也很重要。
May 29, 2025
谢谢！
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