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Jevon

May 11, 2025

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我如今经历了高兴的感情。我记得以前我在学校学习得很努力,也不放弃。现在我不久会毕业了。我以前在学校有很多问题,但是现在我有很多空闲时间。生活总是向前,过去可能充满麻烦,但是总有一天问题会得到解决。谢谢!


Nowadays I experienced a lot of happiness. I remembered before I studied really hard at school, never give up once. Now, not long, I will be graduated. Before, at school, I had a lot of problems, but now I have a lot of free time. Life always moves forward, past might be full of troubles, but one day problem will be solved.

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今天

如今经历了高兴的感情我体验了很多幸福

Nowadays I experienced a lot of happiness. I remembered before I studied really hard at school, never give up once. Now, not long, I will be graduated. Before, at school, I had a lot of problems, but now I have a lot of free time. Life always moves forward, past might be full of troubles, but one day problem will be solved.

lifehardtimesforward

我记得以前我在学校学习得很努力,不放弃。

我以前在学校有很多问题,但是现在我有很多空闲时间。

生活总是向前,过去可能充满麻烦,但是总有一天问题会得到解决。

谢谢!

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Jevon

May 13, 2025

7

谢谢!

如今经历了许多令人高兴的情。

我记得以前我在学校学习得很努力,也不放弃。

现在我不久我就会毕业了。

现在我即将毕业。

生活总是向前,过去可能充满麻烦,但总有一天问题会得到解决。

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Jevon

May 13, 2025

7

令人-》cause/arouse
即将-》about to
谢谢!

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我如今经历了高兴的感情。


如今经历了许多令人高兴的情。

如今经历了高兴的感情我体验了很多幸福

Nowadays I experienced a lot of happiness. I remembered before I studied really hard at school, never give up once. Now, not long, I will be graduated. Before, at school, I had a lot of problems, but now I have a lot of free time. Life always moves forward, past might be full of troubles, but one day problem will be solved. lifehardtimesforward

我记得以前我在学校学习得很努力,也不放弃。


我记得以前我在学校学习得很努力,也不放弃。

我记得以前我在学校学习得很努力,不放弃。

现在我不久会毕业了。


现在我不久我就会毕业了。

现在我即将毕业。

我以前在学校有很多问题,但是现在我有很多空闲时间。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

生活总是向前,过去可能充满麻烦,但是总有一天问题会得到解决。


生活总是向前,过去可能充满麻烦,但总有一天问题会得到解决。

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谢谢!


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