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Jan. 28, 2025

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今天的路线

醒的时候,我没把我梦回忆好。今天也这样。我平常就去楼上吃早饭,不过今上午想先写一下中文。写完以后,要吃饭准备了去上课。今天教着一节七十五分的数学课。如果我有一点福的话,可能碰见一位我很喜欢的妇女。但是他已经跟什么人谈恋爱。我最好忘记这个主意。要是不太懒,要到健身放去锻炼。另外,得今天弄好些作业。晚上,会画画着休息 。通知这的语法很糟糕的时候,会又有一点儿悲伤又不好意思。但是明天是新机会学习!


When I wake up, I can never remember my dreams . Today was no different. I usually go eat breakfast immediately, but I wanted to try to write some chinese first. After this, I will eat, get ready, then go to school. Today I have a 75 minute long math class. If I’m lucky, I may get to talk to a girl that I like. But, she has a boyfriend already. I should get that idea out of my head. If I’m not lazy, I’ll go to the gym. I have to finish a homework assignment today too. Tonight, I will draw and relax. When I learn how bad my grammar was in this, I will feel a little embarrassed. But tomorrow is another day.

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今天的路线行程

的时候,我不能把我梦回忆起来

When I wake up, I can never remember my dreams . Today was no different. I usually go eat breakfast immediately, but I wanted to try to write some chinese first. After this, I will eat, get ready, then go to school. Today I have a 75 minute long math class. If I’m lucky, I may get to talk to a girl that I like. But, she has a boyfriend already. I should get that idea out of my head. If I’m not lazy, I’ll go to the gym. I have to finish a homework assignment today too. Tonight, I will draw and relax. When I learn how bad my grammar was in this, I will feel a little embarrassed. But tomorrow is another day.

今天也这样。

我平常会马上去楼上吃早饭,不过今上午想先写一下中文。

写完以后,要吃饭然后准备去上课

今天教着一节七十五分的数学课。

如果我有一点福幸运的话,可能碰见一我很喜欢的

但是已经跟什么人谈恋爱。

我最好忘记这个主意。

要是不太懒,要到健身去锻炼。

另外,得今天做完好些作业。

晚上,会画画着休息 。

通知这写到这,意识到自己的语法很糟糕的时候,会又有一点儿悲伤又有点儿不好意思。

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whocares11114

Jan. 30, 2025

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❤️thank you!

醒的时候,我没把我梦回忆好每当我醒来时,从不记得做的梦

今天也这样。

我平常就去楼上吃早饭,不过今上午想先写一下中文。

写完以后,要吃饭准备了我就吃饭,然后准备一下,接着去上课。

今天教着一节七十五分的数学课。

如果我有一点福运气好的话,可能碰见一位我很喜欢的

但是他已经跟什么人谈恋爱有男朋友了

我最好忘记这个主意想法

要是不太懒,要到健身去锻炼。

另外,得今天弄好些完成作业。

晚上,会画画休息 。

通知这当我知道我的语法很糟糕的时候,会又有一点儿悲伤又不好意思。

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whocares11114

Jan. 29, 2025

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Thanks!

今天的路线


今天的路线行程

醒的时候,我没把我梦回忆好。


醒的时候,我没把我梦回忆好每当我醒来时,从不记得做的梦

的时候,我不能把我梦回忆起来

When I wake up, I can never remember my dreams . Today was no different. I usually go eat breakfast immediately, but I wanted to try to write some chinese first. After this, I will eat, get ready, then go to school. Today I have a 75 minute long math class. If I’m lucky, I may get to talk to a girl that I like. But, she has a boyfriend already. I should get that idea out of my head. If I’m not lazy, I’ll go to the gym. I have to finish a homework assignment today too. Tonight, I will draw and relax. When I learn how bad my grammar was in this, I will feel a little embarrassed. But tomorrow is another day.

今天也这样。


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我平常就去楼上吃早饭,不过今上午想先写一下中文。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我平常会马上去楼上吃早饭,不过今上午想先写一下中文。

写完以后,要吃饭准备了去上课。


写完以后,要吃饭准备了我就吃饭,然后准备一下,接着去上课。

写完以后,要吃饭然后准备去上课

今天教着一节七十五分的数学课。


今天教着一节七十五分的数学课。

今天教着一节七十五分的数学课。

如果我有一点福的话,可能碰见一位我很喜欢的妇女。


如果我有一点福运气好的话,可能碰见一位我很喜欢的

如果我有一点福幸运的话,可能碰见一我很喜欢的

但是他已经跟什么人谈恋爱。


但是他已经跟什么人谈恋爱有男朋友了

但是已经跟什么人谈恋爱。

我最好忘记这个主意。


我最好忘记这个主意想法

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

要是不太懒,要到健身放去锻炼。


要是不太懒,要到健身去锻炼。

要是不太懒,要到健身去锻炼。

另外,得今天弄好些作业。


另外,得今天弄好些完成作业。

另外,得今天做完好些作业。

晚上,会画画着休息 。


晚上,会画画休息 。

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

通知这的语法很糟糕的时候,会又有一点儿悲伤又不好意思。


通知这当我知道我的语法很糟糕的时候,会又有一点儿悲伤又不好意思。

通知这写到这,意识到自己的语法很糟糕的时候,会又有一点儿悲伤又有点儿不好意思。

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