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Nov. 6, 2021

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今天的活动

今天我八点起床. 我跟我的朋友参加一个比赛。比赛还没开始,他们要告诉规矩和日程。开局之后,我有吉他课。我学吉他歌的题目是 “Wings You are the Hero.” 那个歌非常难,可是我的老师帮我慢慢学歌。吉他课以后,我就学中文的新汉字。


At 8am today I woke up. I join a competition with my friend. The competition hasn't started, but they're just telling us the rules and schedule. After the opening, I had guitar lesson. I learned a guitar song by the title of 'Wings You are the Hero.' That song is very hard, but my teacher help learn the song slowly. After the lesson, I then studied new Chinese words

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今天的活动

今天我八点起床.

我跟我的朋友参加一个比赛。

比赛还没开始,他们告诉我们规矩和日程。

开局之后,我有吉他课。

我学吉他歌的题目是 “Wings You are the Hero.” 那歌非常难,可是我的老师我慢慢学

吉他课以后,我就学中文的新汉字。

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今天的活动


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今天我八点起床.


今天我八点起床.

我跟我的朋友参加一个比赛。


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比赛还没开始,他们要告诉规矩和日程。


比赛还没开始,他们告诉我们规矩和日程。

开局之后,我有吉他课。


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我学吉他歌的题目是 “Wings You are the Hero.” 那个歌非常难,可是我的老师帮我慢慢学歌。


我学吉他歌的题目是 “Wings You are the Hero.” 那歌非常难,可是我的老师我慢慢学

吉他课以后,我就学中文的新汉字。


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