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kaikai

Jan. 9, 2026

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今天的感覺

今天我沒去上中文課,因為我昨晚不舒服得一點覺也不睡。
好像可能有一點發燒,昨晚得天氣很冷但是我一直感覺我很熱。
我一點失望我不會做我的報告,不過我的老師對我很好,跟我說我可以下個禮拜做。
趁我今天沒去上課,我反在家休息一下。
我累得睡覺兩個鐘頭,然後我起來的時候,我餓得吃得下一大碗麵。
我發現我明天要去簽頭髮,因為我精神不夠管太長的頭髮。
洗,乾頭髮很麻煩。


Today I didn't go to my Chinese class because last night I was uncomfortable and couldn't sleep the whole night.
It seems I might have a bit of a fever, last night the weather was really cold but I felt hot the whole time.
I'm a bit disappointed I can't present my presentation but my teacher is really good and told me I can do it next week.
Since I can't go to class today, I instead stayed home to rest.
I was so tired that I slept for 2 hours, and after I woke up I was so hungry I could eat a big bowl of noodles.
I also discovered that I need to go cut my hair tomorrow because I don't have energy to care for long hair.
Washing and drying my hair is so inconvenient.

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今天的感覺

今天我沒去上中文課,因為我昨晚不舒服得一點覺也不睡兒也睡不著

好像可能有一點發燒,昨晚天氣很冷但是我一直感覺很熱。

一點失望我不做我的報告,不過我的老師對我很好,跟我說我可以下個禮拜做。

趁我今天沒去上課,我在家休息一下

我累得睡兩個鐘頭 (兩小時),然後我起來的時候,我餓吃得下一大碗麵。

"兩個鐘頭" is everyday spoken language, while nothing wrong with that if that is what you wanted to practice, it doesn't match the rest of your post.

我發現我明天要去頭髮,因為我精神不夠管沒有太多精神去打理太長的頭髮。

乾頭髮很麻煩。

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今天的感覺


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今天我沒去上中文課,因為我昨晚不舒服得一點覺也不睡。


今天我沒去上中文課,因為我昨晚不舒服得一點覺也不睡兒也睡不著

好像可能有一點發燒,昨晚得天氣很冷但是我一直感覺我很熱。


好像可能有一點發燒,昨晚天氣很冷但是我一直感覺很熱。

我一點失望我不會做我的報告,不過我的老師對我很好,跟我說我可以下個禮拜做。


一點失望我不做我的報告,不過我的老師對我很好,跟我說我可以下個禮拜做。

趁我今天沒去上課,我反在家休息一下。


趁我今天沒去上課,我在家休息一下

我累得睡覺兩個鐘頭,然後我起來的時候,我餓得吃得下一大碗麵。


我累得睡兩個鐘頭 (兩小時),然後我起來的時候,我餓吃得下一大碗麵。

"兩個鐘頭" is everyday spoken language, while nothing wrong with that if that is what you wanted to practice, it doesn't match the rest of your post.

我發現我明天要去簽頭髮,因為我精神不夠管太長的頭髮。


我發現我明天要去頭髮,因為我精神不夠管沒有太多精神去打理太長的頭髮。

洗,乾頭髮很麻煩。


乾頭髮很麻煩。

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