June 24, 2024
今天我们去爬山
今天我和我的朋友在西班牙去爬山。已经我的朋友在那里，但是我不在之前。
这个山非常漂亮，我们很喜欢的。之后爬山我们吃面包。
新加坡没有山，所以我现在在西班牙想爬很多山。
Today with my friends we went to climb a mountain in Spain. My friends have been there already but I haven't been there before.
This mountain was very beautiful. We like it a lot. After climbing the mountain we ate bread.
Singapore does not have mountains, so I want to climb a lot of mountains now that I'm in spain.
今天我们去的爬山
如果是标题的话，简单短语就好了。
今天我和我的朋友在西班牙去爬山。
已经我的朋友在已经去过那里，但是我不在之前没去过。
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这个山非常漂亮，我们很喜欢的。
之后爬山之后我们吃了面包。
新加坡没有山，所以我现在在西班牙想爬很多山。
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不错哦，加油(ง •_•)ง
今天我们去爬山
今天我和我的朋友在西班牙去爬山。
已经我的朋友在已经去过那里，但是我不在之前还没去过。
我的朋友在那里--->My friend is/was there
但是我不在--->but I am/was not there
¶这个山非常漂亮，我们很喜欢
¶的。
之后爬山我们吃爬山(之)后我们吃(了)面包。
新加坡没有山，所以我现在在西班牙想爬很多山。
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Good writing! By the way I went to Spain last month and I really liked it there :)
June 25, 2024
Thank you! hehe I'm happy you liked it! Where did you go?
June 27, 2024
I went to Barcelona, Tarragona, Alicante, Valencia, Granada, Mijas, Seville, Cordoba, Toledo, Segovia and Madrid :) I had a great time in Spain!
June 27, 2024
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已经我的朋友在那里，但是我不在之前。
在那里:means he was there before you arrived (like if you are late, he is waiting there) 去过那里: he have been there
我的朋友在那里--->My friend is/was there 但是我不在--->but I am/was not there
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这个山非常漂亮，我们很喜欢的。
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之后爬山我们吃面包。
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