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Oct. 17, 2021

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书法

我学英文的书法学了两年多了。虽然我做书法做的还好,每次做都很高兴。把钢笔拿在手里的感觉特别好。两个月以前,我买了一支笔。笔有金末所以用这支笔写东西感觉弹簧的那种感觉。

我最近收毛笔,糯米纸。我想开始写中文的书法,可是我不知道笔法。我会先看书法的书,再写书法。我觉得钢笔的墨水跟中文书法的墨水不一样。所以,开始练习以前,我还得买东西准备。

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书法

我学英文的书法学了已经有两年多了。

虽然我做书法做的还好,因为我写书法还挺好,所以每次都很高兴。

虽然 means although, so I am not very sure what you would try to express

把钢笔拿在手里的感觉特别好。

两个月以前,我买了一支笔。

笔有金末所以用这支笔写东西感觉在玩弹簧的那种感觉

我最近收毛笔,糯米、宣纸。

我想开始写中文的书法,可是我不知道笔法。

我会先看书法的书,再写书法。

我觉得钢笔的墨水跟中文书法的墨水不一样。

所以,开始练习以前,我还得买东西准备。

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Haha yes they are quite different. And the tip of Chinese pen is quite soft, so it needs more time to get used to it.

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我学英文的书法学了两年多了。


我学英文的书法学了已经有两年多了。

虽然我做书法做的还好,每次做都很高兴。


虽然我做书法做的还好,因为我写书法还挺好,所以每次都很高兴。

虽然 means although, so I am not very sure what you would try to express

把钢笔拿在手里的感觉特别好。


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两个月以前,我买了一支笔。


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笔有金末所以用这支笔写东西感觉弹簧的那种感觉。


笔有金末所以用这支笔写东西感觉在玩弹簧的那种感觉

我最近收毛笔,糯米纸。


我最近收毛笔,糯米、宣纸。

我想开始写中文的书法,可是我不知道笔法。


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我会先看书法的书,再写书法。


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我觉得钢笔的墨水跟中文书法的墨水不一样。


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所以,开始练习以前,我还得买东西准备。


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