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bea

May 28, 2025

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丽莎的老板

现在丽莎的老板来了。他个子不高, 大概1.70米。但他的帽子看起来很滑稽, 因为它色彩鲜艳, 而且非常大。“啊, 你是丽莎, 欢迎加入队伍!来, 我带你去座位。” 丽莎跟着他。你经过许多门。然后他们停下来。丽莎看到……

丽莎的老板
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丽莎的老板

现在丽莎的老板来了。

他个子不高, 大概1.70米。

但他的帽子看起来很滑稽, 因为它色彩鲜艳, 而且非常大。

“啊, 你是丽莎, 欢迎加入队伍!

来, 我带你去座位。

” 丽莎跟着他。

你经过许多门。

然后他们停下来。

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There is no problem in conveying the meaning. You can learn a little bit about the usage of "了", which will make your article more vivid.

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bea

May 29, 2025

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Okay, I just tranlated a story into Chinese to learn some regular words. Grammar is another chapter.
谢谢你!

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stillfat1999

May 29, 2025

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丽莎的老板


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现在丽莎的老板来了。


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他个子不高, 大概1.70米。


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但他的帽子看起来很滑稽, 因为它色彩鲜艳, 而且非常大。


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“啊, 你是丽莎, 欢迎加入队伍!


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来, 我带你去座位。


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” 丽莎跟着他。


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你经过许多门。


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然后他们停下来。


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