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中文日记 #1

你好!我的名字叫泰勒。我觉得我的中文不好,但我的朋友们却不同意。我七月开始学习中文。我想学更多中文, 但是正在上大学所以我没有太多时间。我想每周写三本日记。我的主要重点是听和说。我擅长阅读,但是我的写作不好。我认为我的口音不好。我觉得我听起来像美国人。哈哈哈。大多数中国人说得很快。我会努力学习中文!欢迎更正。


Hello! My name is Taylor. I think my Chinese is bad, but my friends think otherwise. I started learning Chinese in July. I want to study Chinese more, but I'm in university so I don't have a lot of time. I want to write three journals every week. My main priorities are listening and speaking. I'm good at reading, but my writing is bad. I consider my accent bad. I think I sound very American. Hahaha. Many Chinese speakers speak very fast. I will work hard studying Chinese! Corrections are welcomed.

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中文日记 #1

你好!

我的名字叫泰勒。

我觉得我的中文不好,但我的朋友们却不同意这么认为

但我的朋友们却不同意 is correct but doesn't sound natural enough here.

我想学更多中文, 但是我现在在上大学所以没有太多时间。

我想学更多中文 is correct, but I don't think a Chinese native would say something like 我想学更多中文.

I think this sentence could be replaced with:
我想把更多时间放在中文学习上,但是...

我想每周写三日记。

我的主要学习重点是听说。

我擅长阅读,但是我的写作不好。

我认为而且我觉得我的音不好

认为 is different from 觉得

check this:
https://chinese.stackexchange.com/questions/3508/difference-between-%E8%A7%89%E5%BE%97-and-%E8%AE%A4%E4%B8%BA

觉得我听起来像美国人感觉我的中文带着美国口音

大多数中国人说很快。

中文日记 #1

你好!

我的名字叫泰勒。

我觉得我的中文不好,但我的朋友们却不同意。

我七月开始学习中文。

我想学更多中文, 但因为我正在上大学所以没有太多时间。

我想每周写三本日记。

我的主要学习重点是听和说。

我擅长阅读,但是我的写作不好。

我认为我的口音不纯正

我觉得我听起来像美国人。

哈哈哈。

大多数中国人说得很快。

我会努力学习中文!

欢迎更正。

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Tay

Nov. 12, 2020

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谢谢你!

我觉得我听起来像美国人。


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觉得我听起来像美国人感觉我的中文带着美国口音

哈哈哈。


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大多数中国人说得很快。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

大多数中国人说很快。

我会努力学习中文!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

欢迎更正。


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我认为我的口音不好。


我认为我的口音不纯正

我认为而且我觉得我的音不好

认为 is different from 觉得 check this: https://chinese.stackexchange.com/questions/3508/difference-between-%E8%A7%89%E5%BE%97-and-%E8%AE%A4%E4%B8%BA

中文日记


你好!我的名字叫泰勒。我觉得我的中文不好,但我的朋友们却不同意。我七月开始学习中文。我想学更多中文, 但是正在上大学所以我没有太多时间。我想每周写三本日记。我的主要重点是听和说。我擅长阅读,但是我的写作不好。我认为我的口音不好。我觉得我听起来像美国人。哈哈哈。大多数中国人说得很快。我会努力学习中文!欢迎更正。


中文日记 #1


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你好!


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我的名字叫泰勒。


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我觉得我的中文不好,但我的朋友们却不同意。


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我觉得我的中文不好,但我的朋友们却不同意这么认为

但我的朋友们却不同意 is correct but doesn't sound natural enough here.

我七月开始学习中文。


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我想学更多中文, 但是正在上大学所以我没有太多时间。


我想学更多中文, 但因为我正在上大学所以没有太多时间。

我想学更多中文, 但是我现在在上大学所以没有太多时间。

我想学更多中文 is correct, but I don't think a Chinese native would say something like 我想学更多中文. I think this sentence could be replaced with: 我想把更多时间放在中文学习上,但是...

我想每周写三本日记。


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我想每周写三日记。

我的主要重点是听和说。


我的主要学习重点是听和说。

我的主要学习重点是听说。

我擅长阅读,但是我的写作不好。


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