May 29, 2025
中午
午休时间是12点。丽莎和马克斯一起去公园。施密特先生正在办公桌前吃三明治。托马斯当然吃意大利面。其他同事也来到公园。他们一起吃午饭，马克斯也从每个人那里得到了一些东西吃。
中午
午休时间是12点。
丽莎和马克斯一起去公园。
施密特先生正在办公桌前吃三明治。
托马斯当然照常吃意大利面。
If you mean that eating pasta is Thomas's habit so there is no doubt that he ate pasta today, then this should be changed to“照常”or“依旧”instead of“当然”.
其他同事也来到公园。
他们一起吃午饭，马克斯也从每个人那里得到了一些东西吃。
Feedback
There is no big problem. Chinese people can understand your article. There is no grammatical problem except “当然”. The title is a bit strange, but it does not affect understanding. Chinese people can understand that you are a Chinese beginner after reading your article. Please keep working hard!
May 29, 2025
I read this story for German beginners and just tranlated it. Yes, that's my approximate level. 谢谢你!
May 29, 2025
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午休时间是12点。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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丽莎和马克斯一起去公园。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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施密特先生正在办公桌前吃三明治。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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托马斯当然吃意大利面。 托马斯 If you mean that eating pasta is Thomas's habit so there is no doubt that he ate pasta today, then this should be changed to“照常”or“依旧”instead of“当然”. |
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其他同事也来到公园。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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他们一起吃午饭，马克斯也从每个人那里得到了一些东西吃。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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