April 24, 2022
两个魔女
有一天，两个魔女在一起住。一个有黑色的长头发，喜欢学术。第二个比较可爱，她红色头发很卷曲，而且脸有雀斑。黑头发的魔女叫Iris，红头发的叫EJ。
EJ想和老百姓工作。她在咖啡厅工作。她做咖啡做得不好，所以常常用魔法帮助自己。可惜，她的魔法有时候解决问题不比引起问题多。
Iris想发明不死药水。她在学一个不朽的人。EJ和那个不朽的人谈恋爱。
两个魔女
有一天，两个魔女在一起住。
一个有黑色的长头发，喜欢学术。
第二个比较可爱，她红色头发很卷曲，而且脸有雀斑。
黑头发的魔女叫Iris，红头发的叫EJ。
EJ想和老百姓工作。
她在咖啡厅工作。
她做咖啡做得不好，所以常常用魔法帮助自己。
可惜，她的魔法有时候解决问题不比引起问题多。
Iris想发明不死药水。
她在学一个不朽的人。
EJ和那个不朽的人谈恋爱。
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前面的人物介绍写的很不错，但是文章由于没有结尾的原因读起来戛然而止，建议写作时写一个舒服的结尾哦！
April 26, 2022
哈哈，对，这个结尾不太满意了。她们的故事还没写完了。
两个魔女
有一天，两个魔女在一起住。
一个有黑色的长头发，喜欢学术。
第二个比较可爱，她红色头发很卷曲，而且脸有雀斑。
黑头发的魔女叫Iris，红头发的叫EJ。
EJ想和老百姓工作。
她在咖啡厅里工作。
她做的咖啡做泡得不好太好／她不太会泡咖啡，所以常常用魔法帮助自己。
可惜，她的魔法有时候解决问题不比引起制造更多的问题多。
Iris想发明不死药水长生不老药。
长生不老 is the concept of immortality in English, while literally it means “long live, never become old.”.
她在学一个不朽永生的人。
EJ和那个不朽永生不老的人谈恋爱。
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