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tongxing

Nov. 28, 2022

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November 28, 2022
In the evening. I was watching the game. It was about Arena of Valor. I like it a lot. I like a player called YInuo. He is very handsome. Of course, he is also very good at the game. He is like a star in the sky. I'm the star seeker. I want to be as good as him. Every time I watch them play the game. I get very nervous. Because I am afraid of them losing.
中文：晚上，我在看比赛，它是关于王者荣耀的，我非常喜欢它，我喜欢一个叫一诺的选手，他非常帅，当然他打游戏的技术也非常厉害，他就像是天上的一颗星星的，我就是那个追星星的人，我想和他变得一样优秀，每次我看他们的比赛，我非常紧张，因为我怕他们输。

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mari

November 28, 2022

In the evening, I was watching the game.

~~I was watching the game.~~

It was about Arena of Valor.

I like it a lot.

I like a player called YInuo.

He is very handsome.

Of course, he is also very good at the game.

He is like a star in the sky.

I'm the star seeker.

I want to be as good as hime is.

Every time I watch them play the game, I get very nervous because I am afraid of them losing.

~~I get very nervous.~~

~~Because I am afraid of them losing.~~

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tongxing

Nov. 30, 2022

thank you！

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November 28, 2022