Jan. 12, 2022
Сan not find inaccuracies
I thought that it will be a simple adventure with some drama, but the further I watched the more I found myself on the border between happiness and despair, hope and doubts, light and dark.
They built a town on the edge of the abyss and now the town surrounded it.
She dreams that once she will become a master and will reach lower levels. Once, on a wonderful day, she finds an unusual treasure in the abyss. It was a robot that resembles a human.
They inspired me, this brave couple who can be able to never go back up, only down.
<p>Thanks for any help</p>
Сan not find inaccuracies
It's common to combine "can" and "not" into the single word "cannot".
I thought that it willould be a simple adventure with some drama, but the furthermore I watched the more I found myself on the border between happiness and despair, hope and doubts, light and dark(ness).
I think that "light and darkness" sounds a bit smoother than "light and dark", but other native speakers might disagree. "Light and dark" as you wrote it is not grammatically incorrect.
They built a town on the edge of the abyss, and now the town surroundeds it.
She dreams that once she will become a master and will reach lower levels.
Lower levels of what? This sentence is unclear.
Once, on ae wonderful day, she finds an unusual treasure in the abyss.
It wais a robot that resembles a human.
They inspired me, this brave couple who can be able to never go back up, only down.
Jan. 13, 2022
thanks a lot!
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Сan not find inaccuracies Сan It's common to combine "can" and "not" into the single word "cannot". |
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I thought that it will be a simple adventure with some drama, but the further I watched the more I found myself on the border between happiness and despair, hope and doubts, light and dark. I thought that it w I think that "light and darkness" sounds a bit smoother than "light and dark", but other native speakers might disagree. "Light and dark" as you wrote it is not grammatically incorrect. |
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They built a town on the edge of the abyss and now the town surrounded it. They built a town on the edge of the abyss, and now the town surround |
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She dreams that once she will become a master and will reach lower levels. She dreams that Lower levels of what? This sentence is unclear. |
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They inspired me, this brave couple who can be able to never go back up, only down. They inspired me, this brave couple who can |
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