June 15, 2021
Счастье
Я нахожу счастье во многих вещах. Мой парень, мои кошки, мои растения, одеяла и искусство. Мелочи важнее всего. Жизнь может казаться грустной, но она также прекрасна! Счастье важно.
I find happiness in a lot of things. My boyfriend, my cats, my plants, blankets, and art. The little things are what matter most. Life can seem sad, but it's also beautiful! Happiness is important.
Счастье
Я нахожу счастье во многих вещах.
Мой парень, мои кошки, мои растения, одеяла и искусство.
Одеяло - is smth. like this https://www.google.com/search?q=%D0%BE%D0%B4%D0%B5%D1%8F%D0%BB%D0%BE&sxsrf=ALeKk03lk3YuxZSgMCJO5lLu1EselQQCOg:1623784502056&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjg377TrJrxAhWDmMMKHQvkCmMQ_AUoAXoECAIQAw&biw=1536&bih=754
Maybe you meant плед? https://www.google.com/search?q=%D0%BF%D0%BB%D0%B5%D0%B4&tbm=isch&ved=2ahUKEwjtucHUrJrxAhUHqYsKHdU7AXkQ2-cCegQIABAA&oq=%D0%BF%D0%BB%D0%B5%D0%B4&gs_lcp=CgNpbWcQAzIECAAQQzIECAAQQzICCAAyAggAMgIIADICCAAyAggAMgIIADICCAAyBAgAEEM6BAgjECc6BQgAELEDUPyjAlj7pgJg_6oCaABwAHgAgAFpiAGnApIBAzMuMZgBAKABAaoBC2d3cy13aXotaW1nwAEB&sclient=img&ei=OPzIYO29C4fSrgTV94TIBw&bih=754&biw=1536
(It's just a guess, and if you meant одела, it's absolutely ok=)
Мелочи важнее всего.
Жизнь может казаться грустной, но она также прекрасна!
Счастье важно.
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Very cute post=) And no grammar mistake!
I personally would write the first sentence as Я нахожу радость во многих вещах. (I find joy, happiness ...)
Счастье is something more general and this word perfectly suits the last sentence.
All my corrections and suggestions to this post are very optional, you've written really good text.
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Я нахожу счастье во многих вещах. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Мой парень, мои кошки, мои растения, одеяла и искусство. Мой парень, мои кошки, мои растения, одеяла и искусство. Одеяло - is smth. like this https://www.google.com/search?q=%D0%BE%D0%B4%D0%B5%D1%8F%D0%BB%D0%BE&sxsrf=ALeKk03lk3YuxZSgMCJO5lLu1EselQQCOg:1623784502056&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjg377TrJrxAhWDmMMKHQvkCmMQ_AUoAXoECAIQAw&biw=1536&bih=754 Maybe you meant плед? https://www.google.com/search?q=%D0%BF%D0%BB%D0%B5%D0%B4&tbm=isch&ved=2ahUKEwjtucHUrJrxAhUHqYsKHdU7AXkQ2-cCegQIABAA&oq=%D0%BF%D0%BB%D0%B5%D0%B4&gs_lcp=CgNpbWcQAzIECAAQQzIECAAQQzICCAAyAggAMgIIADICCAAyAggAMgIIADICCAAyBAgAEEM6BAgjECc6BQgAELEDUPyjAlj7pgJg_6oCaABwAHgAgAFpiAGnApIBAzMuMZgBAKABAaoBC2d3cy13aXotaW1nwAEB&sclient=img&ei=OPzIYO29C4fSrgTV94TIBw&bih=754&biw=1536 (It's just a guess, and if you meant одела, it's absolutely ok=) |
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Мелочи важнее всего. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Жизнь может казаться грустной, но она также прекрасна! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Счастье важно. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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