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giizemliniz

July 5, 2022

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ı choose RDJ

I choose RDJ. Maybe you dont know who is it. İts a actor. Robert Downey Jr. I'm a fan for him. He is very kind and funny. If ı talk to him, ı will be very happy. If we were talking about the Marvel, I would be crying. I say,'Why did you do that?' maybe ' I love iron man why you're dead???' ı know its not real but ı love. And İf ı talk to him, it would be a very funny conversation..

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ıI would choose RDJ

I don't know what that letter is, it's not an "i" or "I".

Maybe you dont know who is it.

İtHe is an actor.

Robert Downey Jr.

I'm a fan ofor him.

If ıI talk to him, ıI willould be very happy.

If we were to talking about the Marvel, I would be cryingcry.

I say,'would say : "Why did you do that?'"

Or maybe ' something like : "I love iron man, why you'ris he dead???'"

ıI know he its not real but ıI love him.

I assume you are talking about iron man.

And İf ıI were to talk to him, it would be a very funny conversation..

ı would choose RDJ

I would choose RDJ.

Maybe you dont know who is it.

Sounds a bit condescending, you shouldn’t include this part

İtHe’s a actor.

Because he’s a person and not a thing, you use “he”

I'm a fan ofor him.

“Fan of” is grammatically correct

He is very kind and funny.

If ı were able to talk to him, ı willould be very happy.

If we were talkinged about the Marvel, I would be cryingcry.

For pronouns you don’t use “the”. Would sounds better than will.

I say,'’ll ask, “Why did you do that?'

Ask is better because it’s a question. We also use “” for quotes.

maybe 'I’ll ask “ I love iron man, why you're deaddid he die???'

ı know its not real but ı love.

You need to put a subject after “love”

And İf ıI’d talk to him, it would’d be a very funny conversation..

I would—> I’d
It would—> It’d
We usually contract to make it sound more natural.

ı choose RDJ


ı would choose RDJ

ıI would choose RDJ

I don't know what that letter is, it's not an "i" or "I".

I choose RDJ.


I would choose RDJ.

Maybe you dont know who is it.


Maybe you dont know who is it.

Sounds a bit condescending, you shouldn’t include this part

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

İts a actor.


İtHe’s a actor.

Because he’s a person and not a thing, you use “he”

İtHe is an actor.

Robert Downey Jr.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm a fan for him.


I'm a fan ofor him.

“Fan of” is grammatically correct

I'm a fan ofor him.

He is very kind and funny.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If ı talk to him, ı will be very happy.


If ı were able to talk to him, ı willould be very happy.

If ıI talk to him, ıI willould be very happy.

If we were talking about the Marvel, I would be crying.


If we were talkinged about the Marvel, I would be cryingcry.

For pronouns you don’t use “the”. Would sounds better than will.

If we were to talking about the Marvel, I would be cryingcry.

I say,'Why did you do that?'


I say,'’ll ask, “Why did you do that?'

Ask is better because it’s a question. We also use “” for quotes.

I say,'would say : "Why did you do that?'"

maybe ' I love iron man why you're dead???'


maybe 'I’ll ask “ I love iron man, why you're deaddid he die???'

Or maybe ' something like : "I love iron man, why you'ris he dead???'"

ı know its not real but ı love.


ı know its not real but ı love.

You need to put a subject after “love”

ıI know he its not real but ıI love him.

I assume you are talking about iron man.

And İf ı talk to him, it would be a very funny conversation..


And İf ıI’d talk to him, it would’d be a very funny conversation..

I would—> I’d It would—> It’d We usually contract to make it sound more natural.

And İf ıI were to talk to him, it would be a very funny conversation..

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