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Jack

Dec 21

English

1 min read

Writing Practice

What would your ideal life be?

My ideal life is to be born in a mediated wealthy family and my parents treat each other nicely. During my childhood, I had enough time to play with my fellow children and without a lot of worries. When I was in elementary school and high school, I studied hard and could get a good grade so that I could be admitted to a famous university. While I am growing up, my parents can give me a good education. I can get a decent job and a nice salary and the work is not so busy and does not involve lots of pressure and stress. I can afford a decent car and a house. Also, I can marry a nice woman and not scold me all the time. I also want to have certain savings to deal with some unexpected issues. If possible, I want to retire at the age of fifty and have enough money for me to travel by then. I also want to have a long life span and stay healthy because I hate illness. Of course, I will die, but die from age, not from disease. I think my request is not high, and I hope all my ideal life can come true.

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