Dec. 21, 2021
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First, this question itself has something wrong. You can't say people are honest or dishonest, and can't say they are inherently. Every person can be honest or dishonest, and it completely depends what outcome they will face if they are being honest. If people face unfavorable situations when they are being honest, then they will choose to be dishonest. When they won't face unfavorable situations if they are being honest, I believe they will choose to be honest. Being dishonest, in my opinion, is just a kind of self protection, so if being honest would never cause any unfavorable situations, why do people need to be dishonest? That everyone wants to be a good person is always my belief. If people understand this, the so-called "are inherently" is not worth debating.
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First, this question itself has something got something wrong. First, this question itself has something got something wrong.
You can't sayjust say that people are honest or dishonest, and can't saynor that they are inherently so.
You can't just say that people are honest or dishonest, nor that they are inherently so.
Every person can be honest or dishonest, and it completely depends what outcome they will face if they are beingchoose to be honest.
Every person can be honest or dishonest, and it completely depends what outcome they will face if they choose to be honest.
If people face unfavorable situations when they are being honest, then they will choose to be dishonest.
When they won't face unfavorable situations if they arehave to face consequences for being honest, I believe they will choose to be honest.
When they won't have to face consequences for being honest, I believe they will choose to be honest.
Being dishonest, in my opinion, is just a kind of self protection, so if being honest would never caushave any unfavorable situationconsequences, why wouldo people need to be dishonest?
Being dishonest, in my opinion, is just a kind of self protection, so if being honest would never have any consequences, why would people need to be dishonest?
TIt has always been my belief that everyone wants to be a good person is always my belief.
It has always been my belief that everyone wants to be a good person.
If people understand this, theit's not worth debating over any so-called "are inherently" is not worth debating predispositions".
If people understand this, it's not worth debating over any so-called "inherent predispositions".
"predisposition" just means "what people (inherently)/(by nature) tend to do"
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Dec. 22, 2021
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Dec. 22, 2021
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First, this question itself has something wrong. First, this question itself has something got something wrong. First, this question itself has something got something wrong. |
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You can't say people are honest or dishonest, and can't say they are inherently.
You can't |
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Every person can be honest or dishonest, and it completely depends what outcome they will face if they are being honest.
Every person can be honest or dishonest, and it completely depends what outcome they will face if they |
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If people face unfavorable situations when they are being honest, then they will choose to be dishonest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When they won't face unfavorable situations if they are being honest, I believe they will choose to be honest.
When they won't |
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Being dishonest, in my opinion, is just a kind of self protection, so if being honest would never cause any unfavorable situations, why do people need to be dishonest?
Being dishonest, in my opinion, is just a kind of self protection, so if being honest would never |
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That everyone wants to be a good person is always my belief.
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If people understand this, the so-called "are inherently" is not worth debating.
If people understand this, "predisposition" just means "what people (inherently)/(by nature) tend to do" |
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