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Jack

Jan. 24, 2022

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In China, we have an old saying "Opportunities are always offered to well prepared people".

I believe that luck truly exists, but I believe well-prepared people are more lucky. The harder you work, the luckier you are.

Although luck truly exists, don't just sit there to wait, because that way, the chance of that luck hitting you is very rare. Just like when a blind cat meets a dead rat.

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In China, we have an old saying "Opportunities are always offered to well prepared people".

I believe that luck truly exists, but I believe well-prepared people are more lucky.

The harder you work, the luckier you are.

Although luck truly exists, don't just sit there toand wait, because that way, the chances of that luck hitting you is very rare.

Just like when a blind cat meets a dead rat.

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MonsieurBaguette

Jan. 24, 2022

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You should add a comma in between "old saying" and the quotation marks.

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Jack

Jan. 24, 2022

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Thank you very much.

In China, we have an old saying: "Opportunities are always offered to well prepared people".

Although luck truly exists, don't just sit there to waiting, because that way, the chance of that luck hitting you is very rare.

You can say (A) "don't just sit there waiting", or (B) "don't just sit there and wait". Both of these are common phrases that mean the same thing.

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Jack

Jan. 24, 2022

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Thank you very much.

I believe that luck truly exists, but I believe well-prepared people are more lucky.

change more lucky to luckier

Although luck truly exists, don't just sit there to wait, because that way, the chance of that luck hitting you is very rare.

and wait because that way change to otherwise, luck will pass you by

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Jack

Jan. 25, 2022

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Thank you very much

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Jack

Jan. 25, 2022

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Thank you very much

Writing Practice

In China, we have an old saying "Opportunities are always offered to well prepared people".

In China, we have an old saying: "Opportunities are always offered to well prepared people".

I believe that luck truly exists, but I believe well-prepared people are more lucky.

I believe that luck truly exists, but I believe well-prepared people are more lucky.

The harder you work, the luckier you are.

Although luck truly exists, don't just sit there to wait, because that way, the chance of that luck hitting you is very rare.

Although luck truly exists, don't just sit there to waiting, because that way, the chance of that luck hitting you is very rare.

Although luck truly exists, don't just sit there toand wait, because that way, the chances of that luck hitting you is very rare.

Although luck truly exists, don't just sit there to wait, because that way, the chance of that luck hitting you is very rare.

Just like when a blind cat meets a dead rat.

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