Feb. 28, 2022
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First of all, it's a very sad topic. Nobody wants to die, but that's inevitable.
If I only have a month left, I will be very sorrow and scared although it's useless.
Then what should I do next? To be honest, I don't know.
Most likely, I will do nothing, just tell my family what they should do after I pass away.
If I still can walk, I will go somewhere famous for sightseeing. If I still have a good appetite, I will eat some delicious food. If I can still sleep, I will have a good sleep.
It's always miserable that people are going to die, but that's the natural rule, and we can do nothing about it.
So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do more meaningful things for our society and we humans to extend our lives.
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First of all, it's a very sad topic.
Nobody wants to die, but thait's inevitable.
I am exactly sure what you are saying here, if you are saying that it is inevitable to not want to die then you would be correct, but if you are trying to say that dying is inevitable then you would say "but it's inevitable"
It's always miserableupsetting that people are going to die, but that's the natural rule, and we can do nothing about it.
So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do more meaningful things for our society and we humans to extend our livesto have our legacy live on.
I don't understand what you mean by "we humans to extend our lives." Are you trying to say "and do things that will extend our lives"
March 1, 2022
Nobody wants to die, but thait's inevitable.
I am exactly sure what you are saying here, if you are saying that it is inevitable to not want to die then you would be correct, but if you are trying to say that dying is inevitable then you would say "but it's inevitable"
Dying is inevitable.
March 1, 2022
So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do more meaningful things for our society and we humans to extend our livesto have our legacy live on.
I don't understand what you mean by "we humans to extend our lives." Are you trying to say "and do things that will extend our lives"
Do more meaningful things to us fellow humans seems to be able to extend our lives.
March 1, 2022
So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do more meaningful things for our society and we humans to extend our livesto have our legacy live on.
I don't understand what you mean by "we humans to extend our lives." Are you trying to say "and do things that will extend our lives"
Do more meaningful things to us fellow humans seems to be able to extend our lives.
March 1, 2022
So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do more meaningful things for our society and we humans to extend our livesto have our legacy live on.
I don't understand what you mean by "we humans to extend our lives." Are you trying to say "and do things that will extend our lives"
Do more meaningful things to us fellow humans seems to be able to extend our lives.
If I only have a month left, I will be very sorrowful and scared although it's useless.
Most likely, I will do nothing, j. Just tell my family what they should do after I pass away.
So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do more meaningful things for our society and we humans to extend our lives.
"we humans to extend our lives"
What you mean here?
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March 1, 2022
So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do more meaningful things for our society and we humans to extend our lives.
"we humans to extend our lives"
What you mean here?
Do meaningful things to fellow humans to make our lives seem longer.
March 1, 2022
So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do more meaningful things for our society and we humans to extend our lives.
"we humans to extend our lives"
What you mean here?
Do meaningful things to fellow humans to make our lives seem longer.
March 1, 2022
Do meaningful things to fellow humans to make our lives seem longer
"Experience meaningful moments with each other that last a lifetime"
March 1, 2022
Thank you very much.
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First of all, it's a very sad topic. |
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Nobody wants to die, but that's inevitable. Nobody wants to die, but I am exactly sure what you are saying here, if you are saying that it is inevitable to not want to die then you would be correct, but if you are trying to say that dying is inevitable then you would say "but it's inevitable"
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If I only have a month left, I will be very sorrow and scared although it's useless. If I only have a month left, I will be very sorrowful and scared although it's useless. |
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Then what should I do next? |
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To be honest, I don't know. |
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Most likely, I will do nothing, just tell my family what they should do after I pass away. Most likely, I will do nothing |
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If I still can walk, I will go somewhere famous for sightseeing. |
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If I still have a good appetite, I will eat some delicious food. |
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If I can still sleep, I will have a good sleep. |
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It's always miserable that people are going to die, but that's the natural rule, and we can do nothing about it. It's always |
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So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do more meaningful things for our society and we humans to extend our lives. So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do more meaningful things for our society and we humans to extend our lives. "we humans to extend our lives"
What you mean here? So when we are still young and are far away from death, we should work hard and study hard, do I don't understand what you mean by "we humans to extend our lives." Are you trying to say "and do things that will extend our lives"
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