June 5, 2021
English Writing Homeworks 1—CHANGES IN THE WAY OF EDUCATION
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Owing to developed conditions, It is much easier for us to effort for study.
For instance, there were simply printing techniques in ancient ages, therefore, the main way of conveying thoughts is oral communication, limited by lots of situations. During the eighteen twenties-one century, abundant of books were translated into diverse languages, flowing in the different parts of the world to extend the distance of thoughtful exchange. Nowadays, it cannot only educate in school of general traditional meaning, but also through the virtue internet online.
As the results, the changes of educational ways are lead to include more various methods, to broaden more vast scope, and to enlighten more tremendous people.
TWO
As the pace of developed techniques speeds up, education has changed enormously. One of the changes is teaching online. Due to such huge changes in the educational area, people have various views. Some parts of them think it is a positive trend, though the rest people hold opposite viewpoints.
The supporters of changes consider learning online to break out the limit between time and space. Therefore students can study casually everywhere and anytime. In terms of the period when Corona virus was spread, teaching activities weren’t stopped as both students and teachers used digital equipment to keep connection. On the contrary, others suppose that this method is not capable to guarantee learning quality, because students will discover it is hard to solve the problems immediately. Worsely, the fact which can not communicate with teachers and classmates face to face brings strange feelings.
Above all, these changes offer convenience to learners, however, it isn’t the best way for receiving education. Whatever traditional or latest, the methods with satisfying demands from students are the greatest.
随着技术的飞速发展，教育发生了巨大的变化。其中一个重大的转变是在线教学。对于教育领域如此巨大的变化，人们有各种各样的看法。有些人认为这是一种积极趋势，而另一些人则持相反观点。
支持这种改变的人认为，在线学习打破了时间和空间的界限。学生可以随时随地学习。例如，在新冠肺炎蔓延期间，教学活动一直没有停止，学生和老师都在家中使用数字设备上课。相反，有些人认为在线学习不能保证学习质量，因为学生会发现很难及时解决问题。更糟糕的是，他们无法与老师和同学面对面交谈，这给他们带来了疏离感。
综上所述，尽管这些变化为学习者提供了便利，但它们不一定是接受教育的最佳方式。不管传统的还是新颖的，能够满足学生需求的方法才是最好的。
Writing homeworks
homework is a noncount noun, we never say homeworks
CHANGES IN THE WAY OF EDUCATION
ONE
Owing to developed conditions, It is much easier for us to put effort forin studying.
For instance, there were simplye printing techniques in the ancient ages, therefore, the main way of conveying thoughts is oral communication, limited by lots of situations.
This sentence doesn't make sense. Because the ancient people printed things, our main way of communicating thoughts is speaking which is limited?
DuringFrom the eighteenth to twenties-oney-first century, an abundantce of books were translated into diverse languages, flowing inacross the different parts of the world to extendincrease the distance of thoughtful exchange.
Nowadays, it cannot only do schools educate in schoolthe sense of general traditional meaning, but also through the virtues of the internet online.
You don't need to say the ¨internet online¨ because it is redundant
As thea results, the changes ofin educational ways are lead to the include more varioussion of more diverse methods, tohe broaden more vasting of scope, and tohe enlighten more tremendousing of more people.
broadening and more vast scope are redundant, and also what scope are you talking about?
TWO
As the pace of developeding techniques speeds upincreases, education has changed enormously.
One of the changes is teaching online.
Due to such huge changes in the educational area, people have various viewying opinions.
Some parts of them think it is a positive trend, though the rest people hold opposite viewpointswhile others disagree.
You don't need to say that the others have an opposite opinion as it is obvious.
The supporters of changes consider learning online to break out the limit between time and space.
This sentence doesn't really make sense
Therefore students can study casually everywhere and anytime.
In terms of the period when Corona virusOVID-19 was spreading, teaching activities weren’t stopped as both students and teachers used digital equipment to keep connection.
It is more official to say COVID
On the contrary, others suppose that this method is not capable tof guarantee learning quality learning, because students will discover ithat is hard to solve the problems immediately.
quality learning means good learning
WEven worsely, the fact whicheachers and classmates can not communicate with teachers and classmates face to face brings strange feelingsface to face, which creates discomfort.
Above all, these changes offer convenience to learners, however, it isn’t the best way for receiving education.
WhateverRegardless of whatever is the traditional or latest method, the methods withat satisfying the demands ofrom students are the greatbest.
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Excellent work, looking forward to future writing from you!
June 6, 2021
Thank you very much for your correction！(｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ
June 6, 2021
Owing to developed conditions, It is much easier for us to put effort forin studying.
I should like to ask，if “study” is a noun, can I do without "ing"?
June 6, 2021
As thea results, the changes ofin educational ways are lead to the include more varioussion of more diverse methods, tohe broaden more vasting of scope, and tohe enlighten more tremendousing of more people.
broadening and more vast scope are redundant, and also what scope are you talking about?
I want to express "the scope of educated people"
June 6, 2021
On the contrary, others suppose that this method is not capable tof guarantee learning quality learning, because students will discover ithat is hard to solve the problems immediately.
quality learning means good learning
Wow！I never knew it could be used like this！
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Writing homeworks Writing homework homework is a noncount noun, we never say homeworks
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Owing to developed conditions, It is much easier for us to effort for study. Owing to developed conditions, It is much easier for us to put effort |
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For instance, there were simply printing techniques in ancient ages, therefore, the main way of conveying thoughts is oral communication, limited by lots of situations. For instance, there were simpl This sentence doesn't make sense. Because the ancient people printed things, our main way of communicating thoughts is speaking which is limited?
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During the eighteen twenties-one century, abundant of books were translated to diverse launguage, flowing in the different parts of the world to extend the distance of thoughtful exchange. |
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Nowadays, it cannot only educate in school of general traditional meaning, but also through the virtue internet online. Nowadays, You don't need to say the ¨internet online¨ because it is redundant
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As the results, the changes of educational ways are lead to include more various methods, to broaden more vast scope, and to enlighten more tremendous people. As broadening and more vast scope are redundant, and also what scope are you talking about?
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As the pace of developed techniques speeds up, education has changed enormously. As the pace of develop |
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One of the changes is teaching online. |
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Due to such huge changes in the educational area, people have various views. Due to such huge changes in |
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Some parts of them think it is a positive trend, though the rest people hold opposite viewpoints. Some You don't need to say that the others have an opposite opinion as it is obvious.
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The supporters of changes consider learning online to break out the limit between time and space. The supporters of change This sentence doesn't really make sense
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Therefore students can study casually everywhere and anytime. |
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In terms of the period when Corona virus was spread, teaching activities weren’t stopped as both students and teachers used digital equipment to keep connection. In terms of the period when C It is more official to say COVID
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On the contrary, others suppose that this method is not capable to guarantee learning quality, because students will discover it is hard to solve the problems immediately. On the contrary, others suppose that this method is not capable quality learning means good learning
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Worsely, the fact which can not communicate with teachers and classmates face to face brings strange feelings.
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Above all, these changes offer convenience to learners, however, it isn’t the best way for receiving education. |
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Whatever traditional or latest, the methods with satisfying demands from students are the greatest.
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During the eighteen twenties-one century, abundant of books were translated to diverse language, flowing in the different parts of the world to extend the distance of thoughtful exchange. |
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During the eighteen twenties-one century, abundant of books were translated into diverse languages, flowing in the different parts of the world to extend the distance of thoughtful exchange.
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