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sergio

Mar 18

English

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Would you like to go on an extreme camping trip?

Of course I would like to. I have never been to one even thought I love hiking and other extreme sports. Last summer, me and my family went on France and we took part in a very complete activity program which includes hiking, climbing and diving. The reviews of the place don't do it justice. The place was so lively and the people were very friendly with us. However the value for money left much to be desired, it was really expensive to eat out. All in all we had a jaw-dropping experience there and we are planning to repeat it but we still have to make time for. Either way, I can't wait to go on an extreme camping trip. I am quite interested in the campsite because I would like to meet people who I have things in common with.

What is the correct way to say it?
"I would like to meet people who I have things in common with" or
"I would like to meet people with whom I have things in common."
Thanks in advance.

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Of course I would like to.

Of course I would like to.

Don't need "like to".
Usage

I have never been to one even thought I love hiking and other extreme sports.

I have never been to one, even thought I love hiking and other extreme sports.

I have never been ton one even thought I love hiking and other extreme sports.

I have never been ton one even thought I love hiking and other extreme sports.

"on one" not "to one". Taken out other as I do not think hiking is an extreme sport.
Spelling Usage

Last summer, me and my family went on France and we took part in a very complete activity program which includes hiking, climbing and diving.

Last summer, me and my family and I went ton France and we took part in a very complete activity program which includesd hiking, climbing and diving.

Last summer, me and my family went ton France and we took part in a very complete activity program which includes hiking, climbing and diving.

Last summer, me and my family and I went ton France and we took part in a very complete activity program which includesd hiking, climbing and diving.

would say "my family and I" is correct but "me and my family" would be used colloquially. "to France" not "on France". "includes" is present tense you are talking about the past.
Grammar Usage

The reviews of the place don't do it justice.

The reviews of the place doidn't do it justice.

don't is present tense have changed to past.
Grammar

The place was so lively and the people were very friendly with us.

The place was so lively and the people were very friendly with us.

Don't need "with us"
Stylistic

However the value for money left much to be desired, it was really expensive to eat out.

However the value for money left much to be desired, and it was really expensive to eat out.

Added "and" to join the sentences.
Usage

All in all we had a jaw-dropping experience there and we are planning to repeat it but we still have to make time for.

All in all, we had a jaw-dropping experience there and we are planning to repeat itgo back, but we still have to make time for it.

All in all we had a jaw-dropping experience there and we are planning to repeat it but we still have to make time for it.

All in all we had a jaw-dropping experience there and we are planning to repeat it but we still have to makfind the time for.

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Either way, I can't wait to go on an extreme camping trip.

I am quite interested in the campsite because I would like to meet people who I have things in common with.

I am quite interested in the campsite, because I would like to meet other people who I have things in common with.

I am quite interested in the campsite because I would like to meet people with whom I have things in common with.

This I would say it more correct but you could probably use yours colloquially.
Usage Stylistic

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