Feb. 13, 2021
Would you like to be immortal, and why ? If not, why not ?
I would never be immortal even if i had the opportunity to, just because it's horrible.
The thing is, i could never stand watching my friends and my family die before me.
I would only agree to be immortal if all the world could be immortal as well but also if there was enough space in the earth to let live everyone.
Would you like to be immortal, and why ? If not, why not ?
I would never be immortal even if iI had the opportunity to, just because it's horrible.
The thing is, iI could never stand watching my friends and my family die before me.
I would only agreewant to be immortal if alleveryone else in the world could be immortal as well but also if, and there was enough space ion the earth to let live everyone live.
Good job! Just remember to capitalize the "I". I just changed a few words to make the last sentence sound more natural.
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I would never be immortal even if i have the opportunity to, just because it's horrible. |
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The thing is, i could never stand watching my friends and my family die before me. The thing is, |
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I would only agree to be immortal if all the world could be immortal as well but also if there was enough space in the earth to let live everyone. I would only Good job! Just remember to capitalize the "I". I just changed a few words to make the last sentence sound more natural. |
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I would never be immortal even if i had the opportunity to, just because it's horrible. I would never be immortal even if |
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Would you like to be immortal, and why ? If not, why not ? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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