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alexwong2164

Jan. 19, 2022

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Who should become a YouTuber?

Anyone can, even an animal can!

But in terms of “marketing”, customer behavior…

The popularity of a female will be so much higher than the male.

I just watched a product video from a female and male YouTuber.

Female 10k viewers, Male 1k viewers.

If you have a daughter, please do convince her to become a YouTuber.

If you have a son, tell him forget about to become a YouTuber.

Or help his sister to become a YouTuber.

The world is never fair to us!

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Who should become a YouTuber?

Anyone can, even an animal can!

But in terms of “marketing”, and customer behavior,

The popularity of a female will be so much higher than the malefemale YouTubers tend to be more popular than male YouTubers.

I just watched a product video from a female andYouTuber and one from a male YouTuber.

FThe female 10k viewers, Male 1kYouTuber's video had ten thousand views, as opposed to the male YouTuber's video's one thousand viewers.

If you have a daughter, please do convince her to become a YouTuber.

If you have a son, tell him to forget about to becomeing a YouTuber.

Or, tell him to help his sister to become a YouTuber.

The world is never fair to us!

Who should become a YouTuber?

Anyone can, even an animal can!

But in terms of “marketing”, customer behavior, and popularity,

I would combine this sentence with the next sentence.

The popularity of a female will be so much higher than the malefemale YouTubers will do a lot better than male YouTubers.

Technically, it is OK to use "female" and "male" as a noun, but in the last few years, it has become associated with incel/非自願獨身 culture. It can sound misogynistic.

I just watched a product video from a female and another product video from a male YouTuber.

This sounds clearer, but native speakers write the way you did too!

Female: 10k viewers,
Male 1k viewers.

We like to use colons (:) for results.

If you have a daughter, please do convince her to become a YouTuber.

If you have a son, tell him to forget about to becomeing a YouTuber.

Or help his sister to become a YouTuber.

The world is never fair to us!

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This looks good! Most of these mistakes are also mistakes that a native English speaker would make!

Who should become a YouTuber?

Anyone can, even an animal can!

Anyone can, even an animal can!

Anyone can, even an animal can!

But in terms of “marketing”, customer behavior…

But in terms of “marketing”, customer behavior, and popularity,

But in terms of “marketing”, and customer behavior,

The popularity of a female will be so much higher than the male.

The popularity of a female will be so much higher than the malefemale YouTubers will do a lot better than male YouTubers.

The popularity of a female will be so much higher than the malefemale YouTubers tend to be more popular than male YouTubers.

I just watched a product video from a female and male YouTuber.

I just watched a product video from a female and another product video from a male YouTuber.

I just watched a product video from a female andYouTuber and one from a male YouTuber.

Female 10k viewers, Male 1k viewers.

Female: 10k viewers,
Male 1k viewers.

FThe female 10k viewers, Male 1kYouTuber's video had ten thousand views, as opposed to the male YouTuber's video's one thousand viewers.

If you have a daughter, please do convince her to become a YouTuber.

If you have a daughter, please do convince her to become a YouTuber.

If you have a son, tell him forget about to become a YouTuber.

If you have a son, tell him to forget about to becomeing a YouTuber.

If you have a son, tell him to forget about to becomeing a YouTuber.

Or help his sister to become a YouTuber.

Or, tell him to help his sister to become a YouTuber.

The world is never fair to us!

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