Jan. 19, 2022
Anyone can, even an animal can!
But in terms of “marketing”, customer behavior…
The popularity of a female will be so much higher than the male.
I just watched a product video from a female and male YouTuber.
Female 10k viewers, Male 1k viewers.
If you have a daughter, please do convince her to become a YouTuber.
If you have a son, tell him forget about to become a YouTuber.
Or help his sister to become a YouTuber.
The world is never fair to us!
Who should become a YouTuber?
Anyone can, even an animal can!
But in terms of “marketing”, and customer behavior…,
The popularity of a female will be so much higher than the malefemale YouTubers tend to be more popular than male YouTubers.
I just watched a product video from a female andYouTuber and one from a male YouTuber.
FThe female 10k viewers, Male 1kYouTuber's video had ten thousand views, as opposed to the male YouTuber's video's one thousand viewers.
If you have a daughter, please do convince her to become a YouTuber.
If you have a son, tell him to forget about to becomeing a YouTuber.
Or, tell him to help his sister to become a YouTuber.
The world is never fair to us!
Who should become a YouTuber?
Anyone can, even an animal can!
But in terms of “marketing”, customer behavior…, and popularity,
I would combine this sentence with the next sentence.
The popularity of a female will be so much higher than the malefemale YouTubers will do a lot better than male YouTubers.
Technically, it is OK to use "female" and "male" as a noun, but in the last few years, it has become associated with incel/非自願獨身 culture. It can sound misogynistic.
I just watched a product video from a female and another product video from a male YouTuber.
This sounds clearer, but native speakers write the way you did too!
Female: 10k viewers, .¶
Male 1k viewers.
We like to use colons (:) for results.
If you have a daughter, please do convince her to become a YouTuber.
If you have a son, tell him to forget about to becomeing a YouTuber.
Or help his sister to become a YouTuber.
The world is never fair to us!
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Who should become a YouTuber? |
Anyone can, even an animal can! Anyone can, even an animal Anyone can, even an animal |
But in terms of “marketing”, customer behavior… But in terms of “marketing”, customer behavior I would combine this sentence with the next sentence.
But in terms of “marketing” |
The popularity of a female will be so much higher than the male.
Technically, it is OK to use "female" and "male" as a noun, but in the last few years, it has become associated with incel/非自願獨身 culture. It can sound misogynistic.
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I just watched a product video from a female and male YouTuber. I just watched a product video from a female and another product video from a male YouTuber. This sounds clearer, but native speakers write the way you did too!
I just watched a product video from a female |
Female 10k viewers, Male 1k viewers. Female: 10k viewers We like to use colons (:) for results.
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If you have a daughter, please do convince her to become a YouTuber. If you have a daughter, please |
If you have a son, tell him forget about to become a YouTuber. If you have a son, tell him to forget about If you have a son, tell him to forget about |
Or help his sister to become a YouTuber. Or, tell him to help his sister |
The world is never fair to us! |
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