March 18, 2023
What's the most beautiful monument you've ever visited?
It happened when I was at school. On our end-of-year trip we went to Greece to see the Acropolis of Athens. Our history teacher came with us to teach us about the art and architecture of the place. Although it was surprisingly crowded and we were there for a week, it was worth it.
When you visit historical places like this, it feels as if you were on another planet. And that happened to me as I saw the Parthenon. Despite my expectations were high, I was amazed by its majesty. Our teacher told us about its importance, the civilization who built it and what values it represented at present. It was an unforgettable experience.
And so, I am now looking forward to visiting the Colosseum in Rome. It's my next destination of exploration and learning about ancient cultures.
What's the most beautiful monument you've ever visited?
It happened when I was at school.
OnFor our end-of-year trip, we went to Greece to see the Acropolis ofin Athens.
Technically, there is more than one acropolis; however, we normally use the word to refer to the one in Athens, so you wouldn't have to specify here.
Our history teacher came with us to teach us about the art and architecture of the place.
Although it was surprisingly crowded and we were there for a week, it was worth it.
When you visit historical places like this, it feels as if you were on another planet.
And that happened to me as I saw the Parthenon.
Despite my high expectations were high, I was still amazed by its majestyicness.
Our teacher told us about its importance, the civilization whothat built it, and what values it represented at currently represents.
It was an unforgettable experience.
And so, I am now looking forward to visiting the Colosseum in Rome.
It's my next destination of exploration and learningI hope to learn more about ancient cultures.
Your point was clear, but I was having a hard time rephrasing the sentence. I think this is what you were trying to say though.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
March 19, 2023
Thanks a million! (◕‿◕)/
What's the most beautiful monument you've ever visited?
It happened when I was at school.
On our end-of-year trip, we went to Greece to see the Acropolis of Athens.
Our history teacher came with us to teach us about the place's art and architecture of the place.
This sounds more natural
Although it was surprisingly crowded and we were there for a week, it was worth it.
When you visit historical places like this, it feels as if you weare on another planet.
And that happened to me as I saw the Parthenon.
Despite that my expectations were high, I was (still) amazed by its majesty.
"still" would add emphasis here
Our teacher told us about its importance, the civilization whothat built it and what values it representeds at present.
"who" is for people and "that" is for most other things
It was an unforgettable experience.
And so, I am now looking forward to visiting the Colosseum in Rome.
It's my next destination tof exploratione and learning about ancient cultures.
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Nice job! Athens sounds wonderful.
March 19, 2023
Many thanks!
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It happened when I was at school. |
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On our end-of-year trip we went to Greece to see the Acropolis of Athens. On our end-of-year trip, we went to Greece to see the Acropolis of Athens.
Technically, there is more than one acropolis; however, we normally use the word to refer to the one in Athens, so you wouldn't have to specify here.
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Our history teacher came with us to teach us about the art and architecture of the place. Our history teacher came with us to teach us about the place's art and architecture This sounds more natural
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Although it was surprisingly crowded and we were there for a week, it was worth it. |
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When you visit historical places like this, it feels as if you were on another planet. When you visit historical places like this, it feels as if you |
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And that happened to me as I saw the Parthenon. |
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Despite my expectations were high, I was amazed by its majesty. Despite that my expectations were high, I was (still) amazed by its majesty. "still" would add emphasis here
Despite my high expectations |
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Our teacher told us about its importance, the civilization who built it and what values it represented at present. Our teacher told us about its importance, the civilization "who" is for people and "that" is for most other things
Our teacher told us about its importance, the civilization |
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It was an unforgettable experience. |
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And so, I am now looking forward to visiting the Colosseum in Rome. |
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It's my next destination of exploration and learning about ancient cultures. It's my next destination to It's my next destination of exploration and Your point was clear, but I was having a hard time rephrasing the sentence. I think this is what you were trying to say though.
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