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What outdoor activities did you do this summer? Did you bike

I wanted to do a lot of things this summer. Unfortunately, I could not do much, because I resigned my job. I was expecting get hired in another company, and I did, but I changed my mind. I decided that job was not for me.
Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs and I did not even notice that it almost end. Among the things I would have liked to do, one of them was to ride bicycle. I have been wanting find places to ride since I arrived in this city. Another one would have been to stay in a cabin on a lake.
I know the next or any other summer I would do it. It just have not been the best summer. I am still fortunate or at least I feel fortunate to have the truly important things.
What I have done is to go to the gym. It might not be the funniest activity, but at least I feel I am committed. Also, studying English.


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I wanted to do a lot of things this summer.

Unfortunately, I could not do much, because I resigned from my job.

'quit my job' also works

I was expecting to get hired inby another company, and I did, but I changed my mind.

I decided that job was not for me.

Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs and I did not even notice that it has almost ended.

Among the things I would have liked to do, one of them was to ride my bicycle.

I have been wanting find places to ride since I arrived in this city.

Another one would have been to stay in a cabin on a lake.

I know the next or any other summer I wouldcan do it.

It just haves not been the best summer.

I am still fortunate or at least I feel fortunate to have the truly important things.

What I have done is to go to the gym.

It might not be the funniestmost fun activity, but at least I feel I am committed.

funniest = most funny / hilarious

Also, studying English.

I wanted to do a lot of things this summer.

Unfortunately, I could non't do much, because I resigned from my job.

or

Unfortunately, I couldn't do much because I quit my job.

I was expecting to get hired inat another company, and I did, but I changed my mind.

I decided that job was not for me.

Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs and I did non't even notice that it was almost endover.

Among the things I would have liked to do, one of themhave done was to ride a bicycle.

I have been wantingwanted to find places to ride since I arrived in this city.

Another one would have been to stay in a cabin on a lake.

I know I can do it the next or any other summer I would do it.

or

I know I can do it the next summer or any other.

It just have nosn't been the best summer.

I am still fortunate or at least I feel fortunate to have the truly important things.

What I have done is to go to the gym.

It might not be the funniestmost fun activity, but at least I feel I am committed.

Also, I've been studying English.

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Very nice job and good for you!

What outdoor activities did you do this summer? Did you bike?

I wanted to do a lot of things this summer.

Unfortunately, I could not do much, because I resigned from my job.

I was expecting to get hired in another company, and I did, but I changed my mind.

I decided that job was not for me.

Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs and I did not even notice that it had almost ended / that it was coming to an end.

Among the things I would have liked to do, one of them was to ride a bicycle/bike.

I have/I’ve been wanting to find places to ride since I arrived in this city.

Another one would have been to stay in a cabin on a lake.

I know that during the next, or any other summer I would eventually do it.

It just might have not been the best summer to do it this year.

I am still fortunate or at least I feel fortunate to have the trulybe doing important things.

What I have done is toI have gone to the gym.

It might not behave been the funniest activity, but at least I feel as though I am committed.

Also, studying English.

What outdoor activities did you do this summer? Did you bike?

I wanted to do a lot of things this summer.

Unfortunately, I could not do much, because I resigned from my job.

alt:
because I quit from my job.

I was expecting get hired in/at another company, and I did, but I changed my mind.

I decided that job was not for me.

Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs, and I did non't even notice that it was almost endover.

Among the things I would have liked to do, one of them was to ride bicycle.

I have been wanting to find places to ride since I arrived in this city.

Another one would have been to stay in a cabin on a lake.

I know theat next summer, or any other summer, I would gladly do it.

It just haves not been the best summer.

I am still fortunate or at least I feel fortunate to have the truly important things.

I am still fortunate, or at least I feel fortunate, to have the truly important things in life

What I have done is to go to the gym.

It might not be the funniestmost fun activity, but at least I feel I am committed.

Also, studying English.

alt:
Also, I have been studying English.

What outdoor activities did you do this summer? Did you bike

What outdoor activities did you do this summer? Did you bike?

What outdoor activities did you do this summer? Did you bike?

I wanted to do a lot of things this summer.

Unfortunately, I could not do much, because I resigned my job.

Unfortunately, I could not do much, because I resigned from my job.

Unfortunately, I could not do much, because I resigned from my job.

Unfortunately, I could non't do much, because I resigned from my job.

Unfortunately, I could not do much, because I resigned from my job.

I was expecting get hired in another company, and I did, but I changed my mind.

I was expecting to get hired inby another company, and I did, but I changed my mind.

I was expecting get hired in/at another company, and I did, but I changed my mind.

I was expecting to get hired inat another company, and I did, but I changed my mind.

I was expecting to get hired in another company, and I did, but I changed my mind.

I decided that job was not for me.

Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs and I did not even notice that it almost end.

Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs and I did not even notice that it has almost ended.

Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs, and I did non't even notice that it was almost endover.

Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs and I did non't even notice that it was almost endover.

Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs and I did not even notice that it had almost ended / that it was coming to an end.

Among the things I would have liked to do, one of them was to ride bicycle.

Among the things I would have liked to do, one of them was to ride my bicycle.

Among the things I would have liked to do, one of themhave done was to ride a bicycle.

Among the things I would have liked to do, one of them was to ride a bicycle/bike.

I have been wanting find places to ride since I arrived in this city.

I have been wanting to find places to ride since I arrived in this city.

I have been wantingwanted to find places to ride since I arrived in this city.

I have/I’ve been wanting to find places to ride since I arrived in this city.

Another one would have been to stay in a cabin on a lake.

I know the next or any other summer I would do it.

I know the next or any other summer I wouldcan do it.

I know theat next summer, or any other summer, I would gladly do it.

I know I can do it the next or any other summer I would do it.

I know that during the next, or any other summer I would eventually do it.

It just have not been the best summer.

It just haves not been the best summer.

It just haves not been the best summer.

It just have nosn't been the best summer.

It just might have not been the best summer to do it this year.

I am still fortunate or at least I feel fortunate to have the truly important things.

I am still fortunate or at least I feel fortunate to have the truly important things.

I am still fortunate or at least I feel fortunate to have the truly important things.

I am still fortunate or at least I feel fortunate to have the trulybe doing important things.

What I have done is to go to the gym.

What I have done is toI have gone to the gym.

It might not be the funniest activity, but at least I feel I am committed.

It might not be the funniestmost fun activity, but at least I feel I am committed.

It might not be the funniestmost fun activity, but at least I feel I am committed.

It might not be the funniestmost fun activity, but at least I feel I am committed.

It might not behave been the funniest activity, but at least I feel as though I am committed.

Also, studying English.

Also, studying English.

Also, I've been studying English.

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