June 18, 2021
What is your favourite thing you own?
My favourite thing is the smartphone, because I can do most of my needs with it. I read, listen to music, work and study with my phone. Yes, I spend a lot of time at the screen, but I can't reduce this time.
What is your favourite thing you own?
I read, listen to music, work and study withon my phone.
I feel like "on" works better in this case.
Yes,It's true that I spend a lot of time at the screenon it , but I can't reduce this time.stop.
I changed "the screen" to it because you've already established what you're talking about (your phone)
The "yes" at the beginning isn't necessary.
Feedback
Good job :)
I'd review prepositions like "with" or "on".
What is your favourite thing you own?
My favourite thing is themy smartphone, because I can do most of my needworks or tasks with it.
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My favourite thing is the smartphone, because I can do most of my needs with it. My favourite thing is |
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I read, listen to music, work and study with my phone. I read, listen to music, work and study I feel like "on" works better in this case. |
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Yes, I spend a lot of time at the screen, but I can't reduce this time.
I changed "the screen" to it because you've already established what you're talking about (your phone) The "yes" at the beginning isn't necessary. |
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