March 3, 2021
What Is Your Favourite Movie and Why?
I really like Mamma Mia, a wonderful musical movie with amazing actors and actresses, like Meryl Streep or Colin Firth. I adore its soundtrack (some of ABBA’s big hits), how the cast dance, the Greek island where the movie was filmed and the positive energy that it transmits.
I feel great when I see this movie, and for this reason I’ve seen it at least 7 times and I hope to see it again soon, in English of course!
What Is Your Favourite Movie and Why?
I really like Mamma Mia, a wonderful musical movie with amazing actors and actresses, like Meryl Streep orand Colin Firth.
They are both in the movie, so you need to use "and".
I adore its soundtrack (some of ABBA’s big hits), how the cast dance, the Greek island where the movie was filmed, and the positive energy that it transmits.
This final comma is up to you I think. Some style guides don't require the final comma in a list of things, while others do. (It's called the "Oxford comma".)
I feel great when I see this movie, and for this reason I’ve seen it at least 7 times and I hope to see it again soon, in English of course!
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Very good! My corrections were incredibly minor.
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I really like Mamma Mia, a wonderful musical movie with amazing actors and actresses, like Meryl Streep or Colin Firth. I really like Mamma Mia, a wonderful musical movie with amazing actors and actresses, like Meryl Streep They are both in the movie, so you need to use "and".
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I adore its soundtrack (some of ABBA’s big hits), how the cast dance, the Greek island where the movie was filmed and the positive energy that it transmits. I adore its soundtrack (some of ABBA’s big hits), how the cast dance, the Greek island where the movie was filmed, and the positive energy that it transmits. This final comma is up to you I think. Some style guides don't require the final comma in a list of things, while others do. (It's called the "Oxford comma".)
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I feel great when I see this movie, and for this reason I’ve seen it at least 7 times and I hope to see it again soon, in English of course! |
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