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leksanrel

June 10, 2021

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What is one thing you will never do again? Why?

I will never paint as bad as I do now. Because I'm making progress, and my arts only get better with experience. It's amazing how your effort makes artworks more and more beautiful.

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What is one thing you will never do again? Why?

I will never paint as badly as I do now.

you need an adverb here (paint badly)

BThis is because I'm making progress, and my arts only gets better with experience.

Only rarely can you start a sentence with because, ie: Because he had learned to swim, he did not drown. (You can also use "since" here)
"Arts" cannot take a possessive, but "art" can.
Instead of "experience", which you could use but is less common in this context, you might say "practice"

It's amazing how your effort makes artworks more and more beautiful.

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Great work!

What is one thing you will never do again? Why?

I will never paint as bad as I do now.

I will never paint as badly as I do now.

Because I'm making progress, and my arts only get better with experience.

BThis is because I'm making progress, and my arts only gets better with experience.

It's amazing how your effort makes artworks more and more beautiful.

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