Jan. 21, 2022
What Future?
When I was a child, I thought in a idealized future where people they had all problems solveded. People was happy , too, the society was fair, and where the technology was working to serve persons. Unfortunately, now I have changed of opinion. I think that the being human is self-destructive and will no stop until to be extinct completely. I don't have fear, rather, I feel sorry seeing where the humanity is directed.
What Future?
When I was a child, I thought in adreamt and idealizsed a future where people they had all their problems solveded.
People wasere happy , too, the society was fair, and where the technology was working to serve personsthe people.
Unfortunately, now I have changed of my opinion.
I think that the being human is self-destructive and will not stop until to be extincthey are completely extinct.
I don't have fear, rather, I feel sorry seeing where the humanity is directed.
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Well written. You don’t need to use the definite article all the time.
Jan. 24, 2022
Thanks for the advise.
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Because you are talking about a hypothetical future, I changed the verb tense from "was" to "would be".
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I don't have fear, rather, I feel sorryow seeing where the humanity is directedgoing.
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Well done!
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