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Ducky

Jan 21

English

1 min read

What Future?

Does the future excite or frighten you? Why? #642things

When I was a child, I thought in a idealized future where people they had all problems solveded. People was happy , too, the society was fair, and where the technology was working to serve persons. Unfortunately, now I have changed of opinion. I think that the being human is self-destructive and will no stop until to be extinct completely. I don't have fear, rather, I feel sorry seeing where the humanity is directed.

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When I was a child, I thought in a idealized future where people they had all problems solveded.

When I was a child, I thought inof a idealized future where people they had all their problems solveded.

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When I was a child, I thought in adreamt and idealizsed a future where people they had all their problems solveded.

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People was happy , too, the society was fair, and where the technology was working to serve persons.

People wasould be happy , too, the society wasould be fair, and where the technology wasould working to serve personsople.

Because you are talking about a hypothetical future, I changed the verb tense from "was" to "would be".
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People wasere happy , too, the society was fair, and where the technology was working to serve personsthe people.

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Unfortunately, now I have changed of opinion.

Unfortunately, now Imy opinion haves changed of opinion.

Re-worded sentence to sound more natural.
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Unfortunately, now I have changed of my opinion.

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I think that the being human is self-destructive and will no stop until to be extinct completely.

I think that thehuman being human iss are self-destructive and will not stop until to bhey are extinct completely.

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I think that the being human is self-destructive and will not stop until to be extincthey are completely extinct.

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I don't have fear, rather, I feel sorry seeing where the humanity is directed.

I don't have fear, rather, I feel sorryow seeing where the humanity is directedgoing.

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I don't have fear, rather, I feel sorry seeing where the humanity is directed.

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