June 10, 2021
What do you see when you look out the window?
I live in the dormitory area of Kharkiv, Ukraine. I live in a multi-storey building on the fourth floor. Walking in this area it's easy to stray as all buildings here look almost the same. From my window, you can see parking, other buildings, and a playground. There is quiet and I like this place because they're a lot of trees and spots where you can spend your time and chill.
Я живу в спальном районе Харькова, Украина. Я живу в многоэтажном доме на четвертом этаже. Гуляя по этому району легко заблудиться потому, что все здания здесь выглядят почти одинаково. Из моего окна видно парковку, другие здания и детскую площадку. Здесь тихо и я люблю это место потому, что здесь много деревьев и мест, где можно провести время и отдохнуть.
Walking in this area it's easy to strayget lost as all buildings here look almost the same.
From my window, you can see parking lots, other buildings, and a playground.
I live in the dormitory area ofin Kharkiv, Ukraine.
I live in a multi-storey building on the fourth floor.
Walking in this area it's easy to stray asIt's easy to get lost in this area since all buildings here look almost the same.
to get lost is more accurate than "to stray" in this context
From my window, you can see the parking lot, other buildings, and a playground.
There isIt's very quiet and. I like this place because they're are a lot of trees and spotplaces where you can spend your time and chill out.
It's true that "they're" is a common way to shorten "they are" but I feel like we wouldn't use that contraction here.
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June 10, 2021
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What do you see when you look out the window? |
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I live in the dormitory area of Kharkiv, Ukraine. I live in the dormitory area |
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I live in a multi-storey building on the fourth floor. I live in a multi-stor |
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Walking in this area it's easy to stray as all buildings here look almost the same.
to get lost is more accurate than "to stray" in this context
Walking in this area it's easy to |
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From my window, you can see parking, other buildings, and a playground. From my window, you can see the parking lot, other buildings, and a playground. From my window, you can see parking lots, other buildings, and a playground. |
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There is quiet and I like this place because they're a lot of trees and spots where you can spend your time and chill.
It's true that "they're" is a common way to shorten "they are" but I feel like we wouldn't use that contraction here.
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