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drtdavid

Feb. 4, 2020

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What are the habits? The key to the success (part 2)

In the last post i wrote about the habits and what it are. In this post i want to write about how work and the next post i'll write about how we building it.

Well, how i said. The habits are the results about how your brain made to save energy and for that build a system which consist to create a any action in a automatic action only if that is constantly repeated.

Talking in biological terms when you are learning something new, into your brain, begins to building a connections between neurons and every time you do that action, the connections start to get more strongly. Is like a dirt road, when if the people start to driving it, the road it become in a route and then in a highway.

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What are the habits? The key to the success (part 2)

In the last post i wrote about the habits and what ithey are.

In this post, i want to write about how habits work, and in the next post i'll write about how we building itform them.

to form a habit = to make something a habit

Well, howas i said.:

The hHabits are the results about how of your brain made to save energy and forsaving energy. To do that, it builds a system which consist to create as of to making any action into an automatic action only if that action is constantly repeated.

I hope I didn't change your meaning here.

Talking in biological terms, when you are learning something new, into your brain, begins to building a connections between neurons, and every time you do that action, the connections start to get more stronglyer.

I prefer "begin to get stronger" but "start" is not incorrect.

Is like buiding a dirt road, when if the. If people start to driving on it, the road itwill become in a route and then in a highway.

"It is like a dirt road..." This is a faulty comparison. You are comparing creating habits to a dirt road. You should compare creating habits to BUILDING a dirt road.

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I enjoyed reading your entry. I am interested in going back to read the first part and following as you develop this.

Feel free to ask me any questions about my editing.

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zinnia

Feb. 4, 2020

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Sorry, I didn't delete the "to".

"...system which consists of to making any action..." (incorrect)
system which consists of making any action (correct)

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drtdavid

Feb. 7, 2020

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Is like buiding a dirt road, when if the. If people start to driving on it, the road itwill become in a route and then in a highway.

"It is like a dirt road..." This is a faulty comparison. You are comparing creating habits to a dirt road. You should compare creating habits to BUILDING a dirt road.

niiiice, thanks

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zinnia

Feb. 7, 2020

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You're welcome.

But I neglected the "it".

It is like building...

What are the habits? The key to the success (part 2)

What are the habits? The key to the success (part 2)

In the last post i wrote about the habits and what it are.

In the last post i wrote about the habits and what ithey are.

In this post i want to write about how work and the next post i'll write about how we building it.

In this post, i want to write about how habits work, and in the next post i'll write about how we building itform them.

Well, how i said.

Well, howas i said.:

The habits are the results about how your brain made to save energy and for that build a system which consist to create a any action in a automatic action only if that is constantly repeated.

The hHabits are the results about how of your brain made to save energy and forsaving energy. To do that, it builds a system which consist to create as of to making any action into an automatic action only if that action is constantly repeated.

Talking in biological terms when you are learning something new, into your brain, begins to building a connections between neurons and every time you do that action, the connections start to get more strongly.

Talking in biological terms, when you are learning something new, into your brain, begins to building a connections between neurons, and every time you do that action, the connections start to get more stronglyer.

Is like a dirt road, when if the people start to driving it, the road it become in a route and then in a highway.

Is like buiding a dirt road, when if the. If people start to driving on it, the road itwill become in a route and then in a highway.

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