Feb. 4, 2020
What are the habits? The key to the success (part 2)
In the last post i wrote about the habits and what it are. In this post i want to write about how work and the next post i'll write about how we building it.
Well, how i said. The habits are the results about how your brain made to save energy and for that build a system which consist to create a any action in a automatic action only if that is constantly repeated.
Talking in biological terms when you are learning something new, into your brain, begins to building a connections between neurons and every time you do that action, the connections start to get more strongly. Is like a dirt road, when if the people start to driving it, the road it become in a route and then in a highway.
What are the habits? The key to the success (part 2)
In the last post i wrote about the habits and what ithey are.
In this post, i want to write about how habits work, and in the next post i'll write about how we building itform them.
to form a habit = to make something a habit
Well, howas i said.:
The hHabits are the results about how of your brain made to save energy and forsaving energy. To do that, it builds a system which consist to create as of to making any action into an automatic action only if that action is constantly repeated.
I hope I didn't change your meaning here.
Talking in biological terms, when you are learning something new, into your brain, begins to building a connections between neurons, and every time you do that action, the connections start to get more stronglyer.
I prefer "begin to get stronger" but "start" is not incorrect.
Is like buiding a dirt road, when if the. If people start to driving on it, the road itwill become in a route and then in a highway.
"It is like a dirt road..." This is a faulty comparison. You are comparing creating habits to a dirt road. You should compare creating habits to BUILDING a dirt road.
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I enjoyed reading your entry. I am interested in going back to read the first part and following as you develop this.
Feel free to ask me any questions about my editing.
Feb. 4, 2020
Sorry, I didn't delete the "to".
"...system which consists of to making any action..." (incorrect)
system which consists of making any action (correct)
Feb. 7, 2020
Is like buiding a dirt road, when if the. If people start to driving on it, the road itwill become in a route and then in a highway.
niiiice, thanks
Feb. 7, 2020
You're welcome.
But I neglected the "it".
It is like building...
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What are the habits? The key to the success (part 2) What are |
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In the last post i wrote about the habits and what it are. In the last post i wrote about |
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In this post i want to write about how work and the next post i'll write about how we building it. In this post, i want to write about how habits work, and in the next post i'll write about how we to form a habit = to make something a habit |
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Well, how i said. Well, |
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The habits are the results about how your brain made to save energy and for that build a system which consist to create a any action in a automatic action only if that is constantly repeated.
I hope I didn't change your meaning here. |
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Talking in biological terms when you are learning something new, into your brain, begins to building a connections between neurons and every time you do that action, the connections start to get more strongly. Talking in biological terms, when you are learning something new I prefer "begin to get stronger" but "start" is not incorrect. |
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Is like a dirt road, when if the people start to driving it, the road it become in a route and then in a highway. Is like buiding a dirt road "It is like a dirt road..." This is a faulty comparison. You are comparing creating habits to a dirt road. You should compare creating habits to BUILDING a dirt road. |
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