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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 2, 2021

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Watching Sesame Street With My Sons

I have watched the Sesame Street since two weeks ago for my listening skills in English.

Every night after my sons slept, I usually watched again and again until I was able to hear them completely.

One day, my sons started to watch them with me, and now they are also enjoying episodes them especially about singing a song.

Even though they don't understand English, they are singing the songs.

I am so glad that they are able to enjoy together.

And I hope they are not going to be afraid of English sentences.

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Watching Sesame Street With My Sons

I have watched thebeen watching Sesame Street since two weeks ago forfor two weeks so far to improve my listening skills in English. / Two weeks ago, I started watching Sesame Street to improve my listening skills in English.

Every night after my sons slept, I usually watched it again and again until I was able to hear themeverything completely.

One day, my sons started to watch ithem with me, and now they are also enjoying episodes them, especially about singing athe ones with songs.

Even though they don't understand English, they are singing the songs.

I am so glad that they are able to enjoy it together.

And I hope they are not going towill not be afraid of English sentences.

"And" isn't used to start sentences. It is used to connect two clauses. You could use it like this:
I am so glad that they are able to enjoy it together, and I hope they will not be afraid of English sentences.

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That sounds fun! Good job! :)

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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 3, 2021

402

Thank you so much.

Watching Sesame Street With My Sons

I have watched the Sesame Street since two weeks ago for my listening skills in English.

I have watched the Sesame Street sincefor two weeks ago forto improve my listening skills in English.

Every night after my sons slept, I usually watched again and again until I was able to hear them completely.

One day, my sons started to watch them with me, and now they are also enjoying episodes them especially about singing a song.

One day, my sons started to watch them with me, and now they are also enjoying episodes them, especially those about singing a song.

Even though they don't understand English, they are singing the songs.

I am so glad that they are able to enjoy together.

I am so glad that they are able to enjoy it together.

If you wish to include yourself in this scenario, you can say 'I am so glad that we are able to enjoy it together'.

And I hope they are not going to be afraid of English sentences.

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Great work! Introducing English media to your children is a great way for them to acquire English naturally.

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

Dec. 3, 2021

402

Thank you so much.

Watching Sesame Street With My Sons

I have watched the Sesame Street since two weeks ago for my listening skills in English.

I have watched the Sesame Street sincefor two weeks ago forto improve my listening skills in English.

I have watched thebeen watching Sesame Street since two weeks ago forfor two weeks so far to improve my listening skills in English. / Two weeks ago, I started watching Sesame Street to improve my listening skills in English.

Every night after my sons slept, I usually watched again and again until I was able to hear them completely.

Every night after my sons slept, I usually watched it again and again until I was able to hear themeverything completely.

One day, my sons started to watch them with me, and now they are also enjoying episodes them especially about singing a song.

One day, my sons started to watch ithem with me, and now they are also enjoying episodes them, especially about singing athe ones with songs.

One day, my sons started to watch them with me, and now they are also enjoying episodes them, especially those about singing a song.

Even though they don't understand English, they are singing the songs.

I am so glad that they are able to enjoy together.

I am so glad that they are able to enjoy it together.

I am so glad that they are able to enjoy it together.

And I hope they are not going to be afraid of English sentences.

And I hope they are not going towill not be afraid of English sentences.

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