July 13, 2022
This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine control; as all was correct, it was a fast visit. The dental clinic is not far of home, so is possible go walking. To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wetting my feet. In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatever I can.
Walking in the Morning
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine control; as all was correct,visit. Everything looked good so it was a fast visit.
This sounds more natural in the US.
The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so is possible go walkingI could walk to it.
This sounds more natural in the US.
To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shoreOn the way home, I went a different way and walked on the beach, w getting my feet wet.
This sounds more natural in the US.
In the coming weeks, I wi'll try to go to the beach all whatwhenever I can.
This sounds more natural in the US. "Whenever" is for time whereas "whatever" is for things or objects.
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Walking in the Morning
This morning, I went to the dentist for a routine controlheck-up; as all was correct, it was a fast visit.
The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so it's possible gto walking there.
To return home, I didtook a little tdetourn and coame back walking on the sand, i on the shore onf the beach, wetting my feet.
In the coming weeks, I will try to go to the beach all whatwhenever I can.
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine control; as all was correct,heckup. Everything was alright, so it was a fast visit.
The dental clinic is not far ofrom my home, so it is possible goto get there by walking.
To return home, I did a little ttook a detourn and come back, walkinged on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wettingand got my feet wet.
In the comingnext few weeks, I will try to go to the beach all whatever I can.
Walking in theA Morning Stroll
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This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine controlmy routinely dentist visit; as all was correctwell, it was a fast visittimely.
Not correct; use well to describe something good. Timely sounds more sophisticated
The dental clinic iwas not far ofrom my home, so it was possible gto walking.
Was is past tense, you’re talking about something that happened in the past you need to use this. Again it was possible = past.
To return home, I didonly had to do a little turn and come back walking on the sand,beach. I dipped my feet in the shorewater onf the beach, wetting my feet.shore.
In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatever I canwhenever I am free.
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Overall good but maintain tense + maintain tone
Walking in the Morning Walk
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine controlappointment; as all was correctwell, it was a fastquick visit.
control-> appointment, correct->well, fast->quick.
The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so it is possible gto walking.
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To returnon my way home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shorewalked back on the beach, wetting my feet. in the sand
In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatenever I can.
Walking in the Morning
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This morning I went to the dentist for a routine This sounds more natural in the US.
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To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wetting my feet. To return home, I
This sounds more natural in the US.
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