July 13, 2022
This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine control; as all was correct, it was a fast visit. The dental clinic is not far of home, so is possible go walking. To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wetting my feet. In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatever I can.
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine control; as all was correct,heckup. Everything was alright, so it was a fast visit.
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine checkup. Everything was alright, so it was a fast visit.
The dental clinic is not far ofrom my home, so it is possible goto get there by walking.
The dental clinic is not far from my home, so it is possible to get there by walking.
To return home, I did a little ttook a detourn and come back, walkinged on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wettingand got my feet wet.
To return home, I took a detour and come back, walked on the sand, in the shore on the beach, and got my feet wet.
In the comingnext few weeks, I will try to go to the beach all whatever I can.
In the next few weeks, I will try to go to the beach whatever I can.
Walking in the Morning Walk
Morning Walk
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine controlappointment; as all was correctwell, it was a fastquick visit.
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine appointment; as all was well, it was a quick visit.
control-> appointment, correct->well, fast->quick.
The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so it is possible gto walking.
The dental clinic is not far from home, so it is possible to walk.
of -> from,
To returnon my way home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shorewalked back on the beach, wetting my feet. in the sand
on my way home, I did a little turn and walked back on the beach, wetting my feet in the sand
In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatenever I can.
In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whenever I can.
Walking in the Morning
This morning, I went to the dentist for a routine controlheck-up; as all was correct, it was a fast visit.
This morning, I went to the dentist for a routine check-up; as all was correct, it was a fast visit.
The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so it's possible gto walking there.
The dental clinic is not far from home, so it's possible to walk there.
To return home, I didtook a little tdetourn and coame back walking on the sand, i on the shore onf the beach, wetting my feet.
To return home, I took a little detour and came back walking on the sand on the shore of the beach, wetting my feet.
In the coming weeks, I will try to go to the beach all whatwhenever I can.
In the coming weeks, I will try to go to the beach whenever I can.
Walking in the Morning
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine control; as all was correct,visit. Everything looked good so it was a fast visit.
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine visit. Everything looked good so it was fast.
This sounds more natural in the US.
The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so is possible go walkingI could walk to it.
The dental clinic is not far from home, so I could walk to it.
This sounds more natural in the US.
To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shoreOn the way home, I went a different way and walked on the beach, w getting my feet wet.
On the way home, I went a different way and walked on the beach getting my feet wet.
This sounds more natural in the US.
In the coming weeks, I wi'll try to go to the beach all whatwhenever I can.
In the coming weeks, I'll try to go to the beach whenever I can.
This sounds more natural in the US. "Whenever" is for time whereas "whatever" is for things or objects.
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Walking in theA Morning Stroll
A Morning Stroll
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This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine controlmy routinely dentist visit; as all was correctwell, it was a fast visittimely.
This morning I went to my routinely dentist visit; as all was well, it was timely.
Not correct; use well to describe something good. Timely sounds more sophisticated
The dental clinic iwas not far ofrom my home, so it was possible gto walking.
The dental clinic was not far from my home, so it was possible to walk.
Was is past tense, you’re talking about something that happened in the past you need to use this. Again it was possible = past.
To return home, I didonly had to do a little turn and come back walking on the sand,beach. I dipped my feet in the shorewater onf the beach, wetting my feet.shore.
To return home, I only had to do a little turn and walk on the beach. I dipped my feet in the water of the shore.
In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatever I canwhenever I am free.
In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach whenever I am free.
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Overall good but maintain tense + maintain tone
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Walking in the Morning
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This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine control; as all was correct, it was a fast visit.
This morning I went to Not correct; use well to describe something good. Timely sounds more sophisticated
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine This sounds more natural in the US.
This morning, I went to the dentist for a routine c
This morning I went to the dentist for a routine control-> appointment, correct->well, fast->quick.
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The dental clinic is not far of home, so is possible go walking.
The dental clinic Was is past tense, you’re talking about something that happened in the past you need to use this. Again it was possible = past.
The dental clinic is not far This sounds more natural in the US.
The dental clinic is not far
The dental clinic is not far of -> from,
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To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wetting my feet.
To return home, I
This sounds more natural in the US.
To return home, I
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In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatever I can.
In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach
In the coming weeks, I This sounds more natural in the US. "Whenever" is for time whereas "whatever" is for things or objects.
In the coming weeks, I will try to go to the beach
In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all wh
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