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ponta

July 30, 2021

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Vaccine

Today, I got a second shot so I've been fully vaccinated at last. I prepared fever medicine, cooling gel sheets, and sports drink because everyone said it's harder for the second time due to fever and a sense of fatigue. The side effect will appear tomorrow and the next day. However, I have to study for the exam on Monday, so I hope the effect won't intense.

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Vaccine

Today, I got amy second shot, so I've been fully vaccinated at last.

I prepared fever've got cough medicine, cooling gel sheets, and sports drinks because everyone said it's harder for the second time due to fever and a sense of fatigueys you feel worse after the second dose. You get fatigue and a fever.

The side effects will appear tomorrow and the next dayday after.

However, I have to study for thean exam on Monday, so I hope the effects won't be intense.

'An exam', because you are introducing a specific thing.

Eg 'I have a dog', or 'I live in an apartment in the city'.

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Nice work overall; I changed a few things to make the writing a little more natural. Good luck with your exam!

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ponta

July 31, 2021

217

Thank you for your corrections!

Vaccine

Today, I got a second shot so I've been fully vaccinated at last.

Today, I got amy second shot, so I've been fully vaccinated at last.

I prepared fever medicine, cooling gel sheets, and sports drink because everyone said it's harder for the second time due to fever and a sense of fatigue.

I prepared fever've got cough medicine, cooling gel sheets, and sports drinks because everyone said it's harder for the second time due to fever and a sense of fatigueys you feel worse after the second dose. You get fatigue and a fever.

The side effect will appear tomorrow and the next day.

The side effects will appear tomorrow and the next dayday after.

However, I have to study for the exam on Monday, so I hope the effect won't intense.

However, I have to study for thean exam on Monday, so I hope the effects won't be intense.

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