July 30, 2021
Today, I got a second shot so I've been fully vaccinated at last. I prepared fever medicine, cooling gel sheets, and sports drink because everyone said it's harder for the second time due to fever and a sense of fatigue. The side effect will appear tomorrow and the next day. However, I have to study for the exam on Monday, so I hope the effect won't intense.
Vaccine
Today, I got amy second shot, so I've been fully vaccinated at last.
I prepared fever've got cough medicine, cooling gel sheets, and sports drinks because everyone said it's harder for the second time due to fever and a sense of fatigueys you feel worse after the second dose. You get fatigue and a fever.
The side effects will appear tomorrow and the next dayday after.
However, I have to study for thean exam on Monday, so I hope the effects won't be intense.
'An exam', because you are introducing a specific thing.
Eg 'I have a dog', or 'I live in an apartment in the city'.
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Nice work overall; I changed a few things to make the writing a little more natural. Good luck with your exam!
Vaccine |
Today, I got a second shot so I've been fully vaccinated at last. Today |
I prepared fever medicine, cooling gel sheets, and sports drink because everyone said it's harder for the second time due to fever and a sense of fatigue. I |
The side effect will appear tomorrow and the next day. The side effects will appear tomorrow and the |
However, I have to study for the exam on Monday, so I hope the effect won't intense. However, I have to study for 'An exam', because you are introducing a specific thing.
Eg 'I have a dog', or 'I live in an apartment in the city'. |
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