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alexwong2164

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Unpleasant Truth

Unpleasant Truth

Couple months ago, I start a YouTube channel.

Hoping can make some extra incomes.

As result no one watch my channel.

That was fine because I know the content that I created was really below standard.

So, I stop posting video.

But last week I posted a 15 seconds video about my second hand bicycle.

In this video I didn’t add music, description or anything.

Just a raw video.

BUT!

Up to now is got more than 1.5k people watched and got 10 likes!

So, I immediately take a video about my other second hand bicycle.

Up to day is got 900 viewers watched.

Please tell me what is your comment?

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Unpleasant Truth

The Unpleasant Truth

Couple months ago, I start a YouTube channel.

CA couple months ago, I started a YouTube channel.

Watch out for past tense verbs.

HopingI hope I can make some extra incomes.

As result no one watch my channel.

As a result, no one watches my channel.

There should always be a comma after a transition word or phrase.

That waIt is fine because I know the content that I created was really below standard.

So, I stop posting video.

So, I stopped posting videos.

But last week I posted a 15 seconds video about my second hand bicycle.

But last week, I posted a 15 -seconds video about my second -hand bicycle.

In this video I didn’t add music, description or anything.

In this video, I didn’t add music, or a description or anything.

Up to now is got more than 1.5k people watched and got 10 likes!

Up toRight now, it has gotten more than 1.5k people watched and gotviews and 10 likes!

So, I immediately take a video about my other second hand bicycle.

So, I immediately takeook a video about my other second -hand bicycle.

Up to day is got 900 viewers watched.

Up to day iuntil now, it has gotten 900 viewers watcheds.

Please tell me what is your comment?

Please tell me what is your comment?give me some feedback.

CA couple months ago, I start a YouTube channel.
(or) a couple of months ago,

Hoping canto make some extra incomes.

As resultUnfortunately, no one watched my channel.

So, I stop posting videos.

But last week I posted a 15 -seconds video about my second -hand bicycle.

If a word functions as an adjective, it doesn't have a plural form in English:
Example: a 10-story building, a 43-year-old man, a 6-year-old child, a 10-foot-ladder, a 4-mile walk, a 10-ton truck

If the word functions as a noun, it has a plural form:
The building is 10 stories high
The man is 43 years old.
The child is 6 years old.
The ladder is 10 feet high.
My walk today was 4 miles.
The truck weighs 10 tons.

Up to now it has gotten more than 1.5k people watched and gotviews and 10 likes!

So, I immediately takmade a video about my other second -hand bicycle.

Up to today it's gotten 900 viewers watcheds.

Unpleasant Truth

The Unpleasant Truth

Unpleasant Truth

Couple months ago, I start a YouTube channel.

CA couple months ago, I started a YouTube channel.

CA couple months ago, I start a YouTube channel.
(or) a couple of months ago,

Hoping can make some extra incomes.

HopingI hope I can make some extra incomes.

Hoping canto make some extra incomes.

As result no one watch my channel.

As a result, no one watches my channel.

As resultUnfortunately, no one watched my channel.

That was fine because I know the content that I created was really below standard.

That waIt is fine because I know the content that I created was really below standard.

So, I stop posting video.

So, I stopped posting videos.

So, I stop posting videos.

But last week I posted a 15 seconds video about my second hand bicycle.

But last week, I posted a 15 -seconds video about my second -hand bicycle.

But last week I posted a 15 -seconds video about my second -hand bicycle.

In this video I didn’t add music, description or anything.

In this video, I didn’t add music, or a description or anything.

Just a raw video.

BUT!

Up to now is got more than 1.5k people watched and got 10 likes!

Up toRight now, it has gotten more than 1.5k people watched and gotviews and 10 likes!

Up to now it has gotten more than 1.5k people watched and gotviews and 10 likes!

So, I immediately take a video about my other second hand bicycle.

So, I immediately takeook a video about my other second -hand bicycle.

So, I immediately takmade a video about my other second -hand bicycle.

Up to day is got 900 viewers watched.

Up to day iuntil now, it has gotten 900 viewers watcheds.

Up to today it's gotten 900 viewers watcheds.

Please tell me what is your comment?

Please tell me what is your comment?give me some feedback.

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