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May 27, 2020

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I read that foreign media says it's a wonder that the approval rating for Abe's administration is decreasing even though the number of victims from the coronavirus in Japan is much less than those of other countries.
About the reason why the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just a hot temperature and our citizen's endeavor, not the measures by the government. Many of workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything because we didn't want to lose our companies. It's getting hot and humid in Japan as summer is approaching. That climate also helps us.
We think Tiwanese and South Korean governments are awesome.
As for South Korea, it is north of Japan so I think it was much harder to deal with the coronavirus problems. The same applies to European contries and New York. South Asian coutries like Thai and Vietnam the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once.
We are very angry with the incapability of the current govenment that exposed to public.
The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came." I spontaneously said "What a stupid woman." It seemed she really doesn't think over about the measures to stop the spread of the coronavirus but the election. And, the state of emergency was lifted. Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you have a wonderful measure when the second wave comes aroud.
Otherwise, I think Abe will have to take responsibilities for many problems including his wife's problems. We call Mrs. Abe "Worst Lady", not "First Lady".

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The True Reason

About the reason whyMany workers around me think the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just a just because of the hot temperature and our citizen's' endeavors, not the measures by the government.

Many of workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything because we didn't want to lose our companies.

We think Taiwanese and South Korean governments are awesome.

The same applies to European countries and New York.

South Asian countries like Thailand and Vietnam the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once.

Thai = adjective (e.g. Thai food)
Thailand = the country

We are very angry with the incapability of the current government that, which has been exposed to the public.

The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came.?"

It seems liked she really doesn't think over about the measures to stop the spread of the coronavirus, but instead only thinks of the election.

AndThen, the state of emergency was lifted.

Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you have a wonderful measureplan when the second wave comes around.

We call Mrs. Abe "Worst Lady"," not "First Lady"."

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Tamochan

May 28, 2020

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Thank you so much for modefying!

I read that foreign media says it's a wonder that the approval rating for Abe's administration is decreasing even though the number of victims from the coronavirus in Japan is much less than those of other countries.

About the reasons to why the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just a hotdue to the warmer temperatures and our citizen's' endeavors (or efforts), not the measures of (or done by) the government.

Many of workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything simply because we didn't want to lose our companies.

It's getting hot and humid in Japan as summer is approaching.

That climateweather also helps us.

Climate is a general pattern (which you are referring to) but 'weather' feels more correct here because you could have warmer or less warmer temperatures during any specific week, so it isn't the climate, but the weather this week that you are referring to. I could be wrong about the word choice!

We think Tthe (efforts done by the) Taiwanese and South Korean governments are (were?) awesome.

As forSince South Korea, it is north of Japan so I think it was much harder to deal with the coronavirus problems there.

In South Asian countries like Thailand and Vietnam, the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once.

We are very angry with the incapability of the current government that exposed to public to greater harm than necessary.

The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came.?"

I spontaneously said "What a stupid woman."

It seemed she really doesn't think over about the measures to stop the spread of the coronavirus but the election.

And, the state of emergency was lifted.

Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you will have a wonderful measures put in place when the second wave comes around.

Otherwise, I think Abe will have to take responsibilities for many problems including his wife's problems.

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Tamochan

June 2, 2020

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Thank you so much for modefying!

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roperb

June 3, 2020

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Thank you so much for modefying!

"Thank you so much for your corrections!"

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Tamochan

June 4, 2020

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Oh, understood! Thank you again!

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roperb

June 4, 2020

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No problem man! It is very easy to look up words in a dictionary, but it is very hard to find the natural sounding one!

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I read that foreign media says it's a wonder that the approval rating for Abe's administration is decreasing even though the number of victims from the coronavirus in Japan is much less than those of other countries.


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About the reason why the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just a hot temperature and our citizen's endeavor, not the measures by the government.


About the reasons to why the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just a hotdue to the warmer temperatures and our citizen's' endeavors (or efforts), not the measures of (or done by) the government.

About the reason whyMany workers around me think the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just a just because of the hot temperature and our citizen's' endeavors, not the measures by the government.

Many of workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything because we didn't want to lose our companies.


Many of workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything simply because we didn't want to lose our companies.

Many of workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything because we didn't want to lose our companies.

It's getting hot and humid in Japan as summer is approaching.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That climate also helps us.


That climateweather also helps us.

Climate is a general pattern (which you are referring to) but 'weather' feels more correct here because you could have warmer or less warmer temperatures during any specific week, so it isn't the climate, but the weather this week that you are referring to. I could be wrong about the word choice!

We think Tiwanese and South Korean governments are awesome.


We think Tthe (efforts done by the) Taiwanese and South Korean governments are (were?) awesome.

We think Taiwanese and South Korean governments are awesome.

As for South Korea, it is north of Japan so I think it was much harder to deal with the coronavirus problems.


As forSince South Korea, it is north of Japan so I think it was much harder to deal with the coronavirus problems there.

The same applies to European contries and New York.


The same applies to European countries and New York.

South Asian coutries like Thai and Vietnam the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once.


In South Asian countries like Thailand and Vietnam, the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once.

South Asian countries like Thailand and Vietnam the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once.

Thai = adjective (e.g. Thai food) Thailand = the country

We are very angry with the incapability of the current govenment that exposed to public.


We are very angry with the incapability of the current government that exposed to public to greater harm than necessary.

We are very angry with the incapability of the current government that, which has been exposed to the public.

The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came."


The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came.?"

The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came.?"

I spontaneously said "What a stupid woman."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It seemed she really doesn't think over about the measures to stop the spread of the coronavirus but the election.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It seems liked she really doesn't think over about the measures to stop the spread of the coronavirus, but instead only thinks of the election.

And, the state of emergency was lifted.


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AndThen, the state of emergency was lifted.

Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you have a wonderful measure when the second wave comes aroud.


Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you will have a wonderful measures put in place when the second wave comes around.

Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you have a wonderful measureplan when the second wave comes around.

Otherwise, I think Abe will have to take responsibilities for many problems including his wife's problems.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We call Mrs. Abe "Worst Lady", not "First Lady".


We call Mrs. Abe "Worst Lady"," not "First Lady"."

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