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I read that foreign media says it's a wonder that the approval rating for Abe's administration is decreasing even though the number of victims from the coronavirus in Japan is much less than those of other countries.
About the reason why the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just a hot temperature and our citizen's endeavor, not the measures by the government. Many of workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything because we didn't want to lose our companies. It's getting hot and humid in Japan as summer is approaching. That climate also helps us.
We think Tiwanese and South Korean governments are awesome.
As for South Korea, it is north of Japan so I think it was much harder to deal with the coronavirus problems. The same applies to European contries and New York. South Asian coutries like Thai and Vietnam the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once.
We are very angry with the incapability of the current govenment that exposed to public.
The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came." I spontaneously said "What a stupid woman." It seemed she really doesn't think over about the measures to stop the spread of the coronavirus but the election. And, the state of emergency was lifted. Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you have a wonderful measure when the second wave comes aroud.
Otherwise, I think Abe will have to take responsibilities for many problems including his wife's problems. We call Mrs. Abe "Worst Lady", not "First Lady".

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I read that foreign media says it's a wonder that the approval rating for Abe's administration is decreasing even though the number of victims from the coronavirus in Japan is much less than those of other countries.

It's getting hot and humid in Japan as summer is approaching.

I spontaneously said "What a stupid woman."

It seemed she really doesn't think over about the measures to stop the spread of the coronavirus but the election.

And, the state of emergency was lifted.

Otherwise, I think Abe will have to take responsibilities for many problems including his wife's problems.

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I read that foreign media says it's a wonder that the approval rating for Abe's administration is decreasing even though the number of victims from the coronavirus in Japan is much less than those of other countries.


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About the reason why the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just a hot temperature and our citizen's endeavor, not the measures by the government.


About the reasons to why the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just a hotdue to the warmer temperatures and our citizen's' endeavors (or efforts), not the measures of (or done by) the government. As to why the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just due to the warmer temperatures and our citizens' endeavors (or efforts), not the measures of (or done by) the government.

About the reason whyMany workers around me think the coronavirus is calming down, many workers around me think it's just a just because of the hot temperature and our citizen's' endeavors, not the measures by the government. Many workers around me think the coronavirus is calming down just because of the hot temperature and our citizens' endeavors, not the measures by the government.

Many of workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything because we didn't want to lose our companies.


Many of workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything simply because we didn't want to lose our companies. Many workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything simply because we didn't want to lose our companies.

Many of workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything because we didn't want to lose our companies. Many workers didn't go outside even though the government didn't do anything because we didn't want to lose our companies.

It's getting hot and humid in Japan as summer is approaching.


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That climate also helps us.


That climateweather also helps us. That weather also helps us.

Climate is a general pattern (which you are referring to) but 'weather' feels more correct here because you could have warmer or less warmer temperatures during any specific week, so it isn't the climate, but the weather this week that you are referring to. I could be wrong about the word choice!

We think Tiwanese and South Korean governments are awesome.


We think Tthe (efforts done by the) Taiwanese and South Korean governments are (were?) awesome. We think the (efforts done by the) Taiwanese and South Korean governments are (were?) awesome.

We think Taiwanese and South Korean governments are awesome. We think Taiwanese and South Korean governments are awesome.

As for South Korea, it is north of Japan so I think it was much harder to deal with the coronavirus problems.


As forSince South Korea, it is north of Japan so I think it was much harder to deal with the coronavirus problems there. Since South Korea is north of Japan I think it was much harder to deal with the coronavirus problems there.

The same applies to European contries and New York.


The same applies to European countries and New York. The same applies to European countries and New York.

South Asian coutries like Thai and Vietnam the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once.


In South Asian countries like Thailand and Vietnam, the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once. In South Asian countries like Thailand and Vietnam, the number of victims from the coronavirus is far less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once.

South Asian countries like Thailand and Vietnam the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once. South Asian countries like Thailand and Vietnam the number of victims from the coronavirus is far much less than other countries even though they had a pandemic once.

Thai = adjective (e.g. Thai food) Thailand = the country

We are very angry with the incapability of the current govenment that exposed to public.


We are very angry with the incapability of the current government that exposed to public to greater harm than necessary. We are very angry with the inability of the current government that exposed to public to greater harm than necessary.

We are very angry with the incapability of the current government that, which has been exposed to the public. We are very angry with the incapability of the current government, which has been exposed to the public.

The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came."


The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came.?" The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came?"

The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came.?" The Tokyo Governor said on TV "what if the second wave came?"

I spontaneously said "What a stupid woman."


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It seemed she really doesn't think over about the measures to stop the spread of the coronavirus but the election.


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It seems liked she really doesn't think over about the measures to stop the spread of the coronavirus, but instead only thinks of the election. It seems like she really doesn't think over about the measures to stop the spread of the coronavirus, but instead only thinks of the election.

And, the state of emergency was lifted.


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AndThen, the state of emergency was lifted. Then, the state of emergency was lifted.

Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you have a wonderful measure when the second wave comes aroud.


Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you will have a wonderful measures put in place when the second wave comes around. Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you will have wonderful measures put in place when the second wave comes around.

Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you have a wonderful measureplan when the second wave comes around. Yes, Mr. Abe and Ms. Koike, we believe you have a wonderful plan when the second wave comes around.

Otherwise, I think Abe will have to take responsibilities for many problems including his wife's problems.


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We call Mrs. Abe "Worst Lady", not "First Lady".


We call Mrs. Abe "Worst Lady"," not "First Lady"." We call Mrs. Abe "Worst Lady," not "First Lady."

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