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Jack

Dec. 30, 2020

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Translation Practice.

The new year is coming and everybody is preparing to party. But we don’t have any special plans because all the interesting places are closed because of COVID, so we will celebrate the new year at home. We plan to cook a lot of delicious food, like salad, roast turkey and dessert. We will invite our best friends to celebrate the new year together.
We usually eat Russian salad during the new year (cooked potatoes, canned green beans, stewed meat or sausage, boiled eggs, carrots, pickled cucumber and a little bit mayonnaise) bread with red fish seeds and tangerine, drinking champagne (women drink champagne, men drink white spirits) after dinner, we turn on TV, after the new year's bell rings, the president congratulates the whole nation on the New Year, and then we watch new year's concert.

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Translation Practice.

The new year is coming and everybody is preparing to party.

But we don’t have any special plans because all the interesting places are closed because of COVID, so we will celebrate the new year at home.

We plan to cook a lot of delicious food, like salad, roast turkey and dessert.

We will invite our best friends to celebrate the new year together.

We usually eat Russian salad during the nfor New yYear's (cooked potatoes, canned green beans, stewed meat or sausages, boiled eggs, carrots, pickled cucumber and a little bit of mayonnaise) bread withtogether with bread, red fish seeds and tangerine,s. We drinking champagne (women drink champagne,; men drink white spirits) after dinner, we turn onatch TV, and after the nNew yYear's bell rings, the president congratulates the whole nation on the Nnew Yyear, and then we watch nthe New yYear's concert.

"the new year" => the whole year 2021

"New Year's" (proper noun) => the short time period at the start of 2021, which includes both "New Year's Eve" and "New Year's Day".

The long list of foods gets muddled in the middle.

"turn on the TV" does not imply you actually watch it

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Jack

Dec. 30, 2020

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Thank you very much.

We usually eat Russian salad during the nat New yYear (cooked potatoes, canned green beans, stewed meat or sausage, boiled eggs, carrots, pickled cucumber and a little bit mayonnaise) bread with red --fish seeds-- (do you mean caviar?) and tangerine,s. We drinking champagne (women drink champagne,; men drink white spirits) after dinner, we turn on TV,the TV and after the nNew yYear's bell rings, the president congratulates the whole nation on the New Year, and then we watch nthe New yYear's concert.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Dec. 30, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Translation Practice.

The new year is coming and everybody is preparing to party.

But we don’t have any special plans because all the interesting places are closed because of COVID, so we will celebrate the new year at home.

We plan to cook a lot of delicious food, like salad, roast turkey and dessert.

We will invite our best friends to celebrate the new year together.

We usually eat Russian salad during the new year (cooked potatoes, canned green beans, stewed meat or sausage, boiled eggs, carrots, pickled cucumber and a little bit mayonnaise) bread with red fish seeds and tangerine, drinking champagne (women drink champagne, men drink white spirits) after dinner, we turn on TV, after the new year's bell rings, the president congratulates the whole nation on the New Year, and then we watch new year's concert.

We usually eat Russian salad during the nfor New yYear's (cooked potatoes, canned green beans, stewed meat or sausages, boiled eggs, carrots, pickled cucumber and a little bit of mayonnaise) bread withtogether with bread, red fish seeds and tangerine,s. We drinking champagne (women drink champagne,; men drink white spirits) after dinner, we turn onatch TV, and after the nNew yYear's bell rings, the president congratulates the whole nation on the Nnew Yyear, and then we watch nthe New yYear's concert.

We usually eat Russian salad during the nat New yYear (cooked potatoes, canned green beans, stewed meat or sausage, boiled eggs, carrots, pickled cucumber and a little bit mayonnaise) bread with red --fish seeds-- (do you mean caviar?) and tangerine,s. We drinking champagne (women drink champagne,; men drink white spirits) after dinner, we turn on TV,the TV and after the nNew yYear's bell rings, the president congratulates the whole nation on the New Year, and then we watch nthe New yYear's concert.

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