June 30, 2020
Tokyo Governor's Election
The election for Tokyo governor will be held coming Sunday, but there aren't good candidates so that I really wonder who I vote for.
Narrowing down by an elimination method, no one will be left.
These candidates give me a thought that the election doesn't have any meanings.
Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't go up for any election since they are basically busy and don't have any desire to be famous.
Those who go up for electons are always useless people who just want power and money.
No matter who bacomes Tokyo governor, I can't stop being worried about the future.
I can't be an abstainee by any means. I'll choose one for sure.
After the election, when the person I vote becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position more harshly than the media.
今週の日曜日は東京都知事選だが、誰にいれようか本当に迷うくらい良い人物がいない。
消去法でやっているが、そうすると誰も残らなくなる。
選挙する意味があるのかと思うくらいだ。
そもそも、真剣に東京のことを考えてる人は忙しい上に、欲がないから立候補しない。
立候補するのは、権力と金がほしい使えない連中ばかりだ。
誰が都知事になっても先が思いやられる。
私は決して棄権しない人だ。必ず一人選ぶだろう。
そして、その人物が公約を守れないときは、マスコミよりも厳しく糾弾し、辞任させるために全力を尽くすだろう。
Tokyo Govubernor'satorial Election
Gubernatorial/governor = presidential/president
The election for Tokyo governor will be held this coming Sunday, but there aren't good candidates so that I really wonder who I'm going to vote for.
NIf I narrowing down by anthe candidates using the process of elimination method, no one will be left.
"elimination method" = "process of elimination"
The low quality of these candidates givmake me a thoughtink that these type of elections doesn't have any true meanings.
Those who seriously think about Tokyo's issues won't go uprun for any election since they are basicallytoo busy and don't have any desire to be famous.
"Famous" is okay here, but it connotes more of a celebrity image. A better way to say it might be "...desire to be in the public eye."
Those who go uprun for elections are always useless people who just want power and money.
No matter who baecomes Tokyothe governor of Tokyo, I cawon't be able to stop being worried about the future.
I can't be an abstaineer by any means.
I'll choose someone for sure.
After the election, when the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position even more harshly than the media will.
Feedback
Good job, and I think this is a feeling that people all over the (democratic) world can relate to.
July 1, 2020
Thank you so much for the explanations and teaching "be in the public eye".
I think it's time that we have to ponder how the democratic countries should be.
The election for Tokyo governor will be held the coming Sunday, but there aren't any good candidates so that; I really wonder who I will vote for.
Narrowing down by anUsing the process of elimination method, no one will be leftremaining.
These candidates give me athe thought that the election doeswon't have any meanings.
Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't go upcampaign for any election since they are basically busy and don't have any desire to be famous.
Those who go upcampaign for elections are always useless people who just want power and money.
No matter who baecomes Tokyo's governor, I can't stop being worriedworrying about the future.
I can't be an abstainee by any means.
After the election, when the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position more harshly than the media.
July 1, 2020
Thank you so much for correctin my English.
Tokyo Governor's Election
I do not know Japan's political system. Is the governor of Tokyo equal to a mayor of a city in the United States?
The election for Tokyo's governor will be held this coming Sunday, but there aren't any good candidates so that I really wonder who I should vote for.,
"Tokyo's governor" because we are showing that the governor belongs to Tokyo. "this coming Sunday" because we are being specific to which Sunday it is. "aren't any good candidates" is to highlight that there are none. "I really wonder who I should vote for." Should is used to suggest advice.
Narrowing down by an elimination method, no one will be left.
"an" is not needed, because we do not need to know what type of elimination method or that it is a method. Narrowing down by elimination in general suggests you are narrowing your choices.
These candidates givmake me a thoughtink that the election doesn't have any meanings.
the correct phrase is "make me think" to describe something giving you thoughts.
"meaning" is singular, because any word after "any" has to be singular. "any money", "any day", "any person"
Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't go up for any electionrun for office, since they are basically busy and don't have any desire to be famous.
the phrase to enter an election is "run for office".
Those who go up for electonsrun for office are always useless people who just want power and money.
"run for office"
No matter who baecomes Tokyo's governor, I can't stop being worried about the future.
apostrophe "s" to show ownership or possession.
I can't be an abstainee by any means.
"abstainee" is not an actual word. There is a word called "abstainer", but that is a person who does not take part in desires or pleasures. "abstain" in verb form would be appropriate, since it also means to not vote.
I'll choose someone for sure.¶
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I'll choose a candidate for sure.
"one" is very general, which can make a reader ask "one" what? One suggestion is use "someone" to refer back to the candidates or "a candidate" to be specific and refer back to the election.
After the election, whenif the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best "to slam him out of the governor's position" more harshly than the media.
Feedback
We use "if" instead of "when" to suggest probability of something happening. We don't know whether your candidate will win, so we use "if". "when" would be used if you knew something was happening for sure.
The phrase to vote for a candidate is "vote for".
I'm not sure what you mean by "best to slam him out of the governor's position". Do you mean "criticize"? Perhaps you mean to criticize harshly, which is "trashing" someone.
June 30, 2020
The election for Tokyo's governor will be held this coming Sunday, but there aren't any good candidates so that I really wonder who I should vote for.,
"Tokyo's governor" because we are showing that the governor belongs to Tokyo. "this coming Sunday" because we are being specific to which Sunday it is. "aren't any good candidates" is to highlight that there are none. "I really wonder who I should vote for." Should is used to suggest advice.
"I am really wonder" should be "I really wonder", but otherwise the corrections are correct
July 1, 2020
Thank you so much for correctin my English and the explanations. I think the governor of Tokyo is similar to a state governor in the United States. Tokyo has 23 wards and 26 cities and small islands. There are mayors in the wards and the cities and the islands respectively.
July 1, 2020
"I am really wonder" should be "I really wonder", but otherwise the corrections are correct
Thank you L for seeing that. You are correct, and I made the edit.
July 1, 2020
Thank you so much for correctin my English and the explanations. I think the governor of Tokyo is similar to a state governor in the United States. Tokyo has 23 wards and 26 cities and small islands. There are mayors in the wards and the cities and the islands respectively.
You are very welcome. I see, thank you for letting me know more about the Japanese political system. I enjoyed reading your paper and I look forward to reading more.
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Tokyo Governor's Election Tokyo G Gubernatorial/governor = presidential/president
Tokyo Governor's Election I do not know Japan's political system. Is the governor of Tokyo equal to a mayor of a city in the United States?
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The election for Tokyo governor will be held coming Sunday, but there aren't good candidates so that I really wonder who I vote for. The election for Tokyo governor will be held the coming Sunday, but there aren't any good candidates The election for Tokyo governor will be held this coming Sunday, but there aren't good candidates so The election for Tokyo's governor will be held this coming Sunday, but there aren't any good candidates so "Tokyo's governor" because we are showing that the governor belongs to Tokyo. "this coming Sunday" because we are being specific to which Sunday it is. "aren't any good candidates" is to highlight that there are none. "I really wonder who I should vote for." Should is used to suggest advice.
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Narrowing down by an elimination method, no one will be left.
"elimination method" = "process of elimination"
Narrowing down by "an" is not needed, because we do not need to know what type of elimination method or that it is a method. Narrowing down by elimination in general suggests you are narrowing your choices.
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These candidates give me a thought that the election doesn't have any meanings. These candidates give me The low quality of these candidates These candidates the correct phrase is "make me think" to describe something giving you thoughts.
"meaning" is singular, because any word after "any" has to be singular. "any money", "any day", "any person" |
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Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't go up for any election since they are basically busy and don't have any desire to be famous. Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't Those who seriously think about Tokyo's issues won't "Famous" is okay here, but it connotes more of a celebrity image. A better way to say it might be "...desire to be in the public eye."
Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't the phrase to enter an election is "run for office".
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Those who go up for electons are always useless people who just want power and money. Those who Those who Those who "run for office"
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No matter who bacomes Tokyo governor, I can't stop being worried about the future. No matter who b No matter who b No matter who b apostrophe "s" to show ownership or possession.
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I can't be an abstainee by any means. I can't be an abstaine I can't I can't "abstainee" is not an actual word. There is a word called "abstainer", but that is a person who does not take part in desires or pleasures. "abstain" in verb form would be appropriate, since it also means to not vote.
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I'll choose one for sure. I'll choose someone for sure. I'll choose someone for sure.¶ "one" is very general, which can make a reader ask "one" what? One suggestion is use "someone" to refer back to the candidates or "a candidate" to be specific and refer back to the election.
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After the election, when the person I vote becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position more harshly than the media. After the election, when the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position more harshly than the media. After the election, when the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position even more harshly than the media will. After the election, |
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